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Some people say that printed newspapers are no longer necessary while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that printed newspapers are no longer necessary while others disagree. eEdNG
Nowadays, it is undeniable to say that online news plays a vital role in our daily life, because it has enormous benefits and can be easily accessible to. Consequently, some people argue that printed newspapers are being replaced and will disappear one day because they are no longer needed. Although printed newspapers are not comfortable like they were in the past, i strongly believe that printed newspapers will have an important role in the future. It is noticeable that printed newspapers are being replaced by online news these days. With online news, you can use them to read any kinds of news that you want like economy or social life, while printed newspapers only include some types. In addition, governments can reduce the investments which were used for printing and establishing newspapers. Thanks to the development of social media that we can get the latest and most accurate news without abundant investments. In the other hand, i think newspapers will not disappear completely because there are some things that online news cannot replace. Compared to online news, printed newspapers can be read anywhere or whenever you want due to the fact that they are extremely portable. You may not use an electronic device without a charged battery. Likewise, online news cannot be accessible to if you do not connect to a wifi. This situation can lead to some issues such as you can be informed if you live in a countryside and there is not any electricity there. In conclusion, printed newspapers cannot play a vital role like it was in the past and can be replaced by others electronic devices or social media. However, i am of the opinion that printed newspapers will still exist forever.
Nowadays, it is undeniable to say that
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online
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news
plays a vital role in our daily life,
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because
it has enormous benefits and can be
easily
accessible to.
Consequently
,
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some
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people
argue that
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printed
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newspapers
are
being replaced
and will disappear one day
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because
they are no longer needed. Although
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printed
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newspapers
are not comfortable like they were in the past,
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i
strongly
believe that
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printed
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newspapers
will have an
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important
role in the future.

It is noticeable that
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printed
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newspapers
are
being replaced
by
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online
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news
these days. With
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online
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news
, you can
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use
them to read any kinds of
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news
that you want like economy or social life, while
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printed
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newspapers
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only
include
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some
types.
In addition
,
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governments
can
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reduce
the investments which were
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used
for printing and establishing
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newspapers
. Thanks to the development of social media that we can
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get
the latest and most accurate
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news
without abundant investments.

In the other hand,
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i
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think
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newspapers
will not disappear completely
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because
there are
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some
things that
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online
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news
cannot replace. Compared to
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online
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news
,
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printed
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newspapers
can
be read
anywhere or whenever you want due to the fact that they are
extremely
portable. You may not
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use
an electronic device without a charged battery.
Likewise
,
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online
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news
cannot be accessible to if you do not connect to a
Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)
wifi
. This situation can lead to
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some
issues such as you can
be informed
if you
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live
in a countryside and there is not any electricity there.

In conclusion
,
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printed
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newspapers
cannot play a vital role like it was in the past and can
be replaced
by others electronic devices or social media.
However
,
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i
am of the opinion that
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printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
will
still
exist forever.

IELTS essay Some people say that printed newspapers are no longer necessary while others disagree.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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