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Many people believe that teenagers involvement is high in crimes. Do you agree or dis agree?

Many people believe that teenagers involvement is high in crimes. Do you agree or dis agree? GL8Ao
These days,  it is increasingly becoming common to have a surge in teenagers' involvement in criminal activities in most of the nations.  This essay illustrates  the reasons and various solutions to overcome this scenario have been explained in detail and curb the crime. There have been plethora of cases for the larger segment of young generation to take part in violence.  First reason is getting influenced by films.  Most of the movies are communicating violent action scenes as heroism which is manipulating the immature brains and leading to replicate those in the real life. Second the reason is not receiving proper parental care during childhood.  If children are unable to get socially accepted behavioral guidance,  then they start involved in anti-social activities as growing older. However, there are immense number of solutions to mitigate the teenager violent activities.  One among them is enforcement of severe punishments for trivial mistakes on committers by the government.  As fear is the primary weapon among all other emotions,  younger's need to be threatened with the legal ramifications for the actions they have committed.  Moreover,  counselling has to be accompanied with strict rules to transform them into good citizens for the nation. In conclusion,  although causes cannot be restrained due to the popularity of movies in the society,  the involvement of governing authorities can constrain them through organizing campaigns in school level.  Youth are the backbone for the nation,  so they atmost care need to be given by society and every individual in tuning them as well behaved citizens.
These days,
 
it is 
increasingly
 becoming common to have a surge in 
teenagers
' involvement in criminal activities in most of the nations.  This essay illustrates
  
the reasons and various solutions to overcome this scenario have been 
explained
 in detail and curb the crime. There have been plethora of cases for the larger segment of young generation to take part in violence.  
First
 reason is getting influenced by films.  Most of the movies are communicating violent action scenes as heroism which is manipulating the immature brains and leading to replicate those in the real life. Second the reason is not receiving proper parental care during childhood.  If children are unable to 
get
 
socially
 
accepted
 behavioral guidance,
 
then they 
start
 involved in anti-social activities as growing older.
However
, there are immense number of solutions to mitigate the 
teenager
 violent activities.  One among them is enforcement of severe punishments for trivial mistakes on committers by the 
government
.  As fear is the primary weapon among all other emotions,
 
younger's need to 
be threatened
 with the legal ramifications for the actions they have committed.  
Moreover
,
 
counselling has to be 
accompanied with
 strict 
rules
 to transform them into 
good
 citizens for the nation.
In conclusion
,
 
although causes cannot 
be restrained
 due to the popularity of movies in the society,
 
the involvement of governing authorities can constrain them through organizing campaigns in school level.  Youth 
are
 the backbone for the nation,
 
so
 they 
atmost
 care need to be 
given
 by society and every individual in tuning them as 
well behaved
 citizens.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that teenagers involvement is high in crimes. Do you agree or dis agree?

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