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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. rxao
The opinions are devided amongst the people as some prefer to watch movies in smartphones, tablet or computer while other believe that cinema hall is the best place to enjoy films. In my oipnion, I would support second preference as phones or tablets lack the experience that one would get in the cinema. To commence with, many reasons contributes as why some people like to watch movie on the phone. online streaming is prevailing in contemporary times. Latest films and shows are getting released on the online platforms. Moreover, these platforms are easily accesible on the smartphones and the tablets. Secondly, cost of subscriptions for such sites is comparatively cheaper than tickets of the cinemas. In addition, youngsters are in strong favor of seeing films on the phones since the flexibility it renders in terms of time and place. One can watch movies any time and any where from the phone. Another advantage is the vast variety of programs and shows available on the online streaming platforms. For example, services such as Netflix and Amazon Prime video offer great variety of shows that will keep the audiences on the hook. Conversely, a number of people say that cinemas can not be replaced by phones or tablets regarding experience of enjoying movies. Furthermore, Cinema not only offers bigger screen but also releases powerful sound. As a result, the experience gets more exciting and thrilling relative to what we get from the phones. On top of that, cinema allow us to take on some unique features such as 3D and 5D effects. For instance, talking about my own experience, I watched a movie “ Mission impossible 5” in a theatre with 5D experience enabled. In addition to putting on the 3D glasses, the seat was dynamic and it was moving, vibrating and simulating along with the scenes in the movie. For these causes, cinemas are the best. In conclusion, Phones or tablets are chosen by many people perhaps because of the flexibility it provides while cinemas are the better choice for some as the experience would be more wholesome. I would still prefer to end a weekend by watching a movie in the cinema rather than watching it on the tablet.
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prefer to
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watch
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movies
in smartphones, tablet or computer while other believe that
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cinema
hall is the best place to enjoy films. In my
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oipnion
, I would support second preference as
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phones
or tablets lack the
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experience
that one would
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get
in the cinema.

To commence with,
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many
reasons contributes as why
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some
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people
like to
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watch
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movie
on the
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phone
.
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online
streaming is prevailing in contemporary times.
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Latest
films and
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shows
are getting released on the online platforms.
Moreover
, these platforms are
easily
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accesible
on the smartphones and the tablets.
Secondly
, cost of subscriptions for such sites is
comparatively
cheaper than tickets of the
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cinemas
.
In addition
, youngsters are in strong favor of seeing films on the
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phones
since the flexibility it renders in terms of time and place. One can
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watch
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movies
any time and
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any where
from the
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phone
. Another advantage is the vast variety of programs and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
available on the online streaming platforms.
For example
, services such as Netflix and
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Amazon Prime video
offer great variety of
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shows
that will
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keep
the audiences on the hook.

Conversely
, a number of
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people
say that
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cinemas
can not
be replaced
by
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phones
or tablets regarding
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experience
of enjoying
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movies
.
Furthermore
,
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Cinema
not
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only
offers bigger screen
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but
also
releases powerful sound.
As a result
, the
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experience
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gets
more exciting and thrilling relative to what we
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get
from the
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phones
.
On top of that
,
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cinema
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allow
us to take on
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some
unique features such as 3D and 5D effects.
For instance
, talking about my
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own
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experience
, I
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watched
a
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movie
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“
Mission impossible 5” in a
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theatre
with 5D
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experience
enabled.
In addition
to putting on the 3D glasses, the seat was dynamic and it was moving, vibrating and simulating along with the scenes in the
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movie
. For these causes,
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cinemas
are the best.

In conclusion
,
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Phones
or tablets
are chosen
by
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many
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people
perhaps
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because
of the flexibility it provides while
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cinemas
are the better choice for
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some
as the
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experience
would be more wholesome. I would
still
prefer to
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end
a weekend by watching a
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movie
in the
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cinema
rather
than watching it on the tablet.
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IELTS essay Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.

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