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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. jW8w
The presented plans illustrate the design of a university’s workout center at present and the future plan after reconstruction. As is observed, there will be redevelopment mainly in outdoor courts, alteration in changing room and new set up space such as dance studio, sports shop, and cafe. The layout reveals that both outdoor courts in the east and west wing will be knocked down and reconstructed. The west outdoor courts will be converted into a leisure pool next to the changing room which located in between pools, in addition, the east one will be demolished to sports hall next to the seating place, alongside the new dance studios and the gym space will be extended. Other constructions are the alteration of changing room in the south of leisure pool, and a new sports shop can be found right in the left side of the entrance. In the east wing, another changing room will be adjusted in the south of the dance studio and sports hall and a café will be built next to it.
The presented plans illustrate the design of a university’s workout center at present and the future plan after reconstruction. As
is observed
, there will be redevelopment
mainly
in outdoor courts, alteration in
changing
room
and new set up space such as dance studio,
sports
shop, and
cafe
.

The layout reveals that both outdoor courts in the east and west wing will
be knocked
down and reconstructed. The west outdoor courts will
be converted
into a leisure pool
next
to the
changing
room
which located in between pools,
in addition
, the east one will
be demolished
to
sports
hall
next
to the seating place, alongside the new dance studios and the gym space will
be extended
.

Other constructions are the alteration of
changing
room
in the south of leisure pool, and a new
sports
shop can
be found
right in the
left
side of the entrance. In the east wing, another
changing
room
will
be adjusted
in the south of the dance studio and
sports
hall and a café will
be built
next
to it.
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IELTS essay The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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