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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema Discuss both theses views and give your own opinion. v.12

Technology has transformed the way of audience watching movies utterly. There is always an debate between people that movies should only be watched in cinema hall for better experience while other prefer to watch on their Smartphone’s, Tablets On computers etc. Talking from my perspective I believe I would prefer watching movies and shows on my phone rather than personally going to cinema. Furthermore we will discuss both views in forthcoming paragraphs and will give relevant examples from personal experience. On the one hand, many people prefer watching movies on their smart phones and tablets as it is more convenient. People can watch a film according to their time and preference one can take a break at their discretion. Secondly Due to coronavirus pandemic in 2020 Probably Many theaters were forced to shut due to which the world saw and extreme surge in demand on OTT platforms such as Netflix, Amazon prime videos are some of the online platforms which charges minimum amount of money and provides profound amount of content that one could watch from funny comedy to drama. Thirdly as technology has developed that smartphone company not only manufactures high end devices that fives better sound quality and vivid experience to consumers but also Manufactures Virtual reality headsets. so that one can gain 3d Experience without leaving the home. From examples, I hardly get any time consume Some entertainment from my busy work schedule I prefer to watch it on my phone while commuting. However, Plethora of people tend to enjoy watching movies in theatres. As ambience that it creates is totally different Also nowadays as technology has advanced cinema halls are now equipped with better sound quality and and screens. One can feel of 4D experience which is not available on smart phones. Secondly viewers can distract from their hectic life and submerge themselves in the movie accordingly. For instance I and most of my friend, love going to cinema hall so as to avoid humdrum life. Regardlessly there are some downside to as sometimes the seats are occupied, sometimes there is disturbance from audience which hampers your experience and last but not the least The tickets nowadays are profoundly costly which often puts a person in dilemma situation rather to watch it in theater or on their handsets. To recapitulate, While Many people like to enjoy movies in theatre I believe watching the same on handset far cheaper and convenient.
Technology has transformed the way of audience watching
movies
utterly
. There is always
an
debate between
people
that
movies
should
only
be
watched
in
cinema
hall for better
experience
while other
prefer
to
watch
on their Smartphone’s, Tablets On computers etc. Talking from my perspective I believe I would
prefer
watching
movies
and
shows
on my
phone
rather
than
personally
going to
cinema
.
Furthermore
we will discuss both views in forthcoming paragraphs and will give relevant examples from personal experience.

On the one hand,
many
people
prefer
watching
movies
on their smart
phones
and tablets as it is more convenient.
People
can
watch
a film according to their time and preference one can take a break at their discretion.
Secondly
Due to coronavirus pandemic in 2020
Probably
Many
theaters
were forced
to shut due to which the world
saw
and extreme surge in demand on
OTT
platforms such as Netflix,
Amazon prime
videos are
some of the
online platforms which charges minimum amount of money and provides profound amount of content that one could
watch
from
funny
comedy to drama.
Thirdly
as technology has developed that smartphone
company
not
only
manufactures high
end
devices that fives better sound quality and vivid
experience
to consumers
but
also
Manufactures Virtual reality headsets.
so
that one can gain 3d
Experience
without leaving the home. From examples, I hardly
get
any time consume
Some
entertainment from my busy work schedule I
prefer
to
watch
it on my
phone
while commuting.

However
, Plethora of
people
tend to enjoy watching
movies
in
theatres
. As ambience that it creates is
totally
different
Also
nowadays as technology has advanced
cinema
halls are
now
equipped with better sound quality
and and
screens. One can feel of 4D
experience
which is not available on smart
phones
.
Secondly
viewers can distract from their hectic life and submerge themselves in the
movie
accordingly
. For
instance I
and most of my friend,
love
going to
cinema
hall
so as to
avoid humdrum life.
Regardlessly
there are
some
downside
to as
sometimes
the seats
are occupied
,
sometimes
there is disturbance from audience which hampers your
experience
and last
but
not the least The tickets nowadays are
profoundly
costly which
often
puts a person in dilemma situation
rather
to
watch
it in theater or on their handsets.

To recapitulate, While
Many
people
like to enjoy
movies
in
theatre
I believe watching the same on handset far cheaper and convenient.
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IELTS essay Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others says that to be fully enjoyed, Films need to be seen in a cinema.

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  American English
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