It is often claimed that music is an effective means of uniting those of varying backgrounds and age ranges together. I agree with this because citizens from different cultures often have musical interests in common and music allows you to teach different kinds of people about your country.
People from many different countries are fans of the same artists. This allows people to bond over their shared love of the same band or musical performer, therefore, they can get along with one another despite differences in nationality or even different generations. In many cases, people who would normally have difficulty getting along, have no problem becoming good friends because of their musical idols. For example, people from all over the world are fans of K-Pop, and even nationalities who have had historical differences, such as South Korea, Japan and China, can happily enjoy the same concert.
When you meet someone new, you can teach them about your culture through music. Every country in the world has a unique musical identity, such as different genres, instruments, and songs; thus providing the opportunity to teach a stranger about it. One of the most effective ways to become closer to someone is to improve their lives by teaching them something new and music is often very interesting to people no matter who they are or where they are from. For example, Ireland has traditional Gaelic music and instruments, such as the boran, and people from all over the world visit there to learn about this unique musical culture.
In conclusion, I agree that music can bring people together because it cuts through differences people might have through things we have in common and allows us to come closer by teaching one another about our unique musical heritage.
It is
often
claimed that
music
is an effective means of uniting those of varying backgrounds and age ranges together. I
agree
with this
because
citizens from
different
cultures
often
have
musical
interests in common and
music
allows
you to teach
different
kinds of
people
about your country.
People
from
many
different
countries are fans of the same artists. This
allows
people
to bond over their shared
love
of the same band or
musical
performer,
therefore
, they can
get
along with one another despite differences in nationality or even
different
generations. In
many
cases,
people
who would
normally
have difficulty getting along, have no problem becoming
good
friends
because
of their
musical
idols.
For example
,
people
from all over the world are fans of K-Pop, and even nationalities who have had historical differences, such as South Korea, Japan and China, can
happily
enjoy the same concert.
When you
meet
someone new, you can teach them about your culture through
music
. Every country in the world has a unique
musical
identity, such as
different
genres, instruments, and songs;
thus
providing the opportunity to teach a stranger about it. One of the most effective ways to become closer to someone is to
improve
their
lives
by teaching them something new and
music
is
often
very
interesting to
people
no matter who they are or where they are from.
For example
, Ireland has traditional Gaelic
music
and instruments, such as the
boran
, and
people
from all over the world visit there to learn about this unique
musical
culture.
In conclusion
, I
agree
that
music
can bring
people
together
because
it
cuts
through differences
people
might have through things we have in common and
allows
us to
come
closer by teaching one another about our unique
musical
heritage.
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