According to some people the rich people get the opportunity to give back or help the poor, which is the most imperative part of being wealthy. I fully agree that prosperous people have enough resources to help the needy people and that is the most beautiful part of being affluent.
Firstly, the rich people can help the poor people by doing some charity work. There are many families who are not in a position to provide education to their children. Well off folk can sponsor the education of such children. They can provide the basic amenities to needy people. Non Governmental Organisations are set up so that the help can reach to each and every person in need.
In addition to this, there are more supportive points in regard to this. People with deep pockets have the capability to setup large businesses which generate employment for other citizens. Many factories are established in rural areas where labour work is the means of earning of some families. Being employed will not only improve the lifestyle of the person but will also encourage him to work hard.
Many people wish to help the people in need, but some do not have enough resources to do that. So affluents are fortunate enough to get the chance to help the deprived one's.
All in all, I can conclusively say that the tremendous part of being rich is getting the chance to help people through which one can gain a lot of satisfaction resulting in mental peace.
According to
some
people
the rich
people
get
the opportunity to give back or
help
the poor, which is the most imperative part of being wealthy. I
fully
agree
that prosperous
people
have
enough
resources to
help
the needy
people
and
that is
the most
beautiful
part of being affluent.
Firstly
, the rich
people
can
help
the poor
people
by doing
some
charity work. There are
many
families who are not in a position to provide education to their children. Well off folk can sponsor the education of such children. They can provide the basic amenities to needy
people
.
Non Governmental
Organisations
are set
up
so
that the
help
can reach to each and every person in need.
In addition
to this, there are more supportive points in regard to this.
People
with deep pockets have the capability
to setup
large businesses which generate employment for other citizens.
Many
factories
are established
in rural areas where
labour
work is the means of earning of
some
families.
Being employed
will not
only
improve
the lifestyle of the person
but
will
also
encourage him to work
hard
.
Many
people
wish to
help
the
people
in need,
but
some
do not have
enough
resources to do that.
So
affluents
are fortunate
enough
to
get
the chance to
help
the deprived one's.
All in all, I can
conclusively
say that the tremendous part of being rich is getting the chance to
help
people
through which one can gain
a lot of
satisfaction resulting in mental peace.
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