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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion PBXJ

Nowadays, our life more easier cause of the internet. This is affected natural shopping awareness which is changed online shop. Nevertheless, some people argued that shopping transfer to online, I will discuss both sides in this essay. On the one hand, we can be reduce the price stem from shopping. If we met people who sell the product to us, will be attract their awareness. This is leaded choose the right product, however online shopping is not give a chance it. Second remedy is feeling when we buy something. Researchers find that traditional shopping give the satisfy, it is stem from hormonic. Final view is crime that happens only the internet. If we go to the shop, we can be see the material and size. Everyday, lot of people call to police which problem is cheated by online shops. On the other side, online market is not spend time. If we have the internet, we can book thing which we want. As for busy people, this is ever-rising and benefit of save your time. Second side is we can see all of products one by one. For instance Alibaba, Taobao and other sides have category, and all of clothes, toys, foods are seen details like brand, description, and how to use. In summary, it seems that online shop have lot of advantages like time and watch the products. We do not necessary go to far, just need smartphone and the internet.

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more easier
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affected
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shopping
 awareness which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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online
 shop. Nevertheless
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some
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people
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shopping
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online
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On the one hand, we can be Consider using the past participle "reduced"?reduced
reduce
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shopping
. If we met You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who sell the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 to us, will be Consider using the past participle "attracted"?attracted
attract
 their awareness. This is leaded
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product
, however
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online
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shopping
 is not give a chance it. Second remedy is feeling when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 something. Researchers find that traditional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 give After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'satisfy' is correct. If 'satisfy' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the satisfy
, it is Consider using a past participle here: "stemmed".stemmed
stem
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hormonic
. Final view is crime that happens This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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see
 the material and size. 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?Every day
Everyday
, It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
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On the other side, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 market is not Consider using a past participle here: "spent".spent
spend
 time. If we have the internet, we can book thing which we want. As for busy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, this is ever-rising and benefit of save your time. Second side is we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 all of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 one by one. For instance
 Alibaba, Taobao and other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
 have category, and Consider using "all clothes" or "all of the clothes".all clothesall of the clothes
all of clothes
, toys, foods are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 like brand, description, and how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

In summary, it seems that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 shop have It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 advantages like time and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
. We do not necessary go to far, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 need smartphone and the internet. 