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Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. n61DE
Certain people say that the main ecological issue at the present is the loss of particular classes of plants and animals, while others say that there are many essential ecological issues than endangered flora and fauna. To my mind, there are really significant issues that have to be solved than endangering. It is true that these days’ lots of animals and vegetation are endangered. A lot of rare classes of animals and vegetation are already listed in the red book. We have got to understand that saving animals and vegetation are our duty because the more variety of animals and vegetation will exist, the more exploring, withdrawing, and data will be so that it can save our lives. However, there are several essential reasons. Firstly, it is a drought in the lakes which can be the first reason for the lack of water for animals and even partially for plants. If the animals or the plants do not get enough water, they will not live a long time due to an insufficient number of substances for the organism. Secondly, these are forest fires, and it can also be one of the biggest problems to endangering of flora and fauna. Humans are not able to prevent the forest fires, but they can also be ready to inhibit it for flora and fauna. Finally, these poachers are not as dangerous as others because it is not nature, but we cannot overlook it. While poachers are existing, we and the government should not ignore it and take action for them separately. In conclusion, it would be wrong to ignore more significant problems towards endangered flora and fauna.
Certain
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people
say that the main ecological issue at the present is the loss of particular classes of plants and
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animals
, while others say that there are
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many
essential ecological issues than endangered
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flora
and fauna. To my mind, there are
really
significant issues that
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have to
be solved
than endangering.

It is true that these days’ lots of
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animals
and
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vegetation
are endangered
.
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A lot of
rare classes of
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animals
and
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vegetation
are already listed in the red book. We have
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got
to understand that saving
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animals
and
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vegetation
are our duty
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because
the more variety of
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animals
and
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vegetation
will exist, the more exploring, withdrawing, and data will be
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so
that it can save our
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lives
.

However
, there are several essential reasons.
Firstly
, it is a drought in the lakes which can be the
first
reason for the lack of water for
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animals
and even
partially
for plants. If the
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animals
or the plants do not
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get
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enough
water, they will not
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live
a long time due to an insufficient number of substances for the organism.
Secondly
, these are forest fires, and it can
also
be one of the biggest problems to endangering of
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flora
and fauna. Humans are not able to
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prevent
the forest fires,
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but
they can
also
be ready to inhibit it for
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flora
and fauna.
Finally
, these poachers are not as
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dangerous
as others
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because
it is not nature,
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but
we cannot overlook it. While poachers are existing, we and the
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government
should not
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ignore
it and take action for them
separately
.

In conclusion
, it would be
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wrong
to
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ignore
more significant problems towards endangered
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flora
and fauna.
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IELTS essay Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
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