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Define the term globalization. What are the pros and cons of the effects of it?

Define the term globalization. What are the pros and cons of the effects of it? 9L6Gj
The term globalization is the process of integration among the countries to operate on a large scale. Rapid technological advancements in the 21st century have made it possible for the countries across the globe to connect with each other due to improved transportation system and high-speed telecommunication services. Technology has made globalisation possible in this modern era. This essay will discuss the advantages and the disadvantages it can have on society as a whole. The greatest advantage of globalisation is the economy of scales. Due to the availability of high-speed planes and modern ship vessels, trade-in huge quantities has become possible which has provided a boom to the industries. Due to the high volume of exports, the countries now enjoy economies of scale because of reduced manufacturing cost. Higher exports have caused the economy of the countries to flourish. Further, the availability of imported good in the country will increase the competition amongst local manufacture. These manufacturers will not only improve quality but will reduce the prices to compete with imported goods. This will benefit the consumers as they will now have a variety of products with good value of money. For example, cars in Pakistan were very expensive last year due to the monopoly of local manufacturers but this year the government has allowed the import of Japanese assembled vehicles. This has caused the local car manufacturers to reduce the price which in turn has benefited the consumers. Secondly, it has made it easier for people around the globe to connect with each other far more conveniently. For instance, a person can connect to his friends and family abroad using social media such as Facebook, zoom, Whatsapp etc. Thirdly, the economy of the counties, depending on the tourism sector will flourish because of the large volume of tourist inflows due to better transportation services available. However, with ease comes difficulties. Many believe that globalization has made the job market insecure. According to the latest research, unemployment has risen by 4% in developed countries as companies are hiring cheap labour from the underdeveloped countries in order to save their cost. This is because the presence of globalization has made it easier for people to commute from one place to another. Further, the outflow of skilled workers from under-developed countries to the developed countries have resulted in the drain of valuable technical resources of these countries which in turns slow down the cycle of technology and innovation. I would like to conclude that globalisation has made a great impact in a wider perspective on our lives due to its numerous advantages. However, to enjoy these benefits it is very important to devise strategies relating to the drawbacks it holds.
The term globalization is the process of integration among the
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countries
to operate on a large scale. Rapid technological advancements in the 21st century have made it possible for the
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countries
across the globe to connect with each other
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due
to
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improved
transportation system and high-speed telecommunication services. Technology has made
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globalisation
possible in this modern era. This essay will discuss the advantages and the disadvantages it can have on society as a whole.

The greatest advantage of
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globalisation
is the
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economy
of scales.
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Due
to the availability of high-speed
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planes
and modern ship vessels, trade-in huge quantities has become possible which has provided a boom to the industries.
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Due
to the high volume of exports, the
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countries
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now
enjoy
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economies
of scale
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because
of
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reduced
manufacturing cost. Higher exports have caused the
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economy
of the
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countries
to flourish.
Further
, the availability of imported
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good
in the
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country
will increase the competition
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amongst
local manufacture. These manufacturers will not
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only
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improve
quality
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but
will
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reduce
the prices to compete with imported
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goods
. This will benefit the consumers as they will
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now
have a variety of products with
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good
value of money.
For example
, cars in Pakistan were
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very
expensive last year
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due
to the monopoly of local manufacturers
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but
this year the
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government
has
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allowed
the import of Japanese assembled vehicles. This has caused the local car manufacturers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the price which in turn has benefited the consumers.
Secondly
, it has made it easier for
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people
around the globe to connect with each other far more
conveniently
.
For instance
, a person can connect to his friends and family abroad using social media such as Facebook, zoom,
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Whatsapp
etc.
Thirdly
, the
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economy
of the counties, depending on the tourism sector will flourish
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because
of the large volume of tourist inflows
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due
to better transportation services available.

However
, with
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ease
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comes
difficulties.
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Many
believe that globalization has made the job market insecure. According to the latest research, unemployment has risen by 4% in developed
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countries
as
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companies
are hiring
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cheap
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labour
from the underdeveloped
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countries
in order to save their cost. This is
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because
the presence of globalization has made it easier for
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people
to commute from one place to another.
Further
, the outflow of skilled workers from under-developed
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countries
to the developed
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countries
have resulted in the drain of valuable technical resources of these
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countries
which in turns slow down the cycle of technology and innovation.

I would like
to conclude
that
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globalisation
has made a great impact in a wider perspective on our
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lives
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due
to its numerous advantages.
However
, to enjoy these benefits it is
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very
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important
to devise strategies relating to the drawbacks it holds.
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IELTS essay Define the term globalization. What are the pros and cons of the effects of it?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
448 words
5.5
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