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Some people say that libraries are the best place for getting knowledge. Whereas others are opposed to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.

Some people say that libraries are the best place for getting knowledge. Whereas others are opposed to it. with this. xxDB9

Undoubtedly, libraries are a vast source of knowledge. Some people opine that reading-rooms are the prime source for acquiring intelligence. Whereas, others are against this belief. I personally believe that proficiency cannot be limited to a single source and can be acquired from innumerable sources. This essay will discuss that acquaintace of knowingness is not limited to any single place. First of all, it is undeniable that libraries play a prime role when we need hold of any kind of information. Nevertheless, with advancements in technology now a days, all the quieries could be solved at tip of the hands. For instance, public use Google for any sort of details such as, health care and academics and the answer to that is provided instantly. Secondly, there are plethora of ways of how one can be knowledgable. Academics and real life scenario's and experiences teach better lessons. For example, who are considered as geniuses nowadays like Bill gates have dropped out of universities. Furthermore, there are no barriers, how a single way of gaining knowledge is better. In summary, eventhough reading rooms are efficient source of knowledge, they cannot be coined as the best resource available. Scholastic and factual expertise are way higher ways for becoming a scholar.

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, libraries are a vast You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorigincauseauthorityexpert
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Some
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 opine that reading-rooms are the prime You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorigincauseauthorityexpert
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 for acquiring intelligence. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
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source
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. This essay will discuss that Possible spelling mistake found.acquaintanceacquaint ace
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 of knowingness is not limited to any single place.

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First of all
, it is undeniable that libraries play a prime role when we need hold of any kind of information. Nevertheless
, with advancements in technology Did you mean "nowadays"?nowadays
now a days
, all the Possible spelling mistake found.queries
quieries
 could be solved
 at tip of the hands. For instance
, public This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 Google for any sort of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 such as, health care and academics and the answer to that is provided
instantly
.

Secondly
, there are plethora of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstylefashionformmeansprocesspractice
ways
 of how one can be Possible spelling mistake found.knowledgeable
knowledgable
. Academics and real life scenario's and experiences teach better lessons. For example
, who are considered
 as geniuses nowadays like If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Bill Gates
Bill gates
 have dropped out of universities. Furthermore
, there are no barriers, how a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstylefashionformmeansprocesspractice
way
 of gaining knowledge is better.

In summary, Possible spelling mistake found.even though
eventhough
 reading rooms are efficient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorigincauseauthorityexpert
source
 of knowledge, they cannot be coined
 as the best resource available. Scholastic and factual expertise are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstylefashionformmeansprocesspractice
way
 higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstylefashionformmeansprocesspractice
ways
 for becoming a scholar. 