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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree v.2

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes v. 2
Nowadays, it is told to be many prescribed way for predicting people’s characteristics base on their preferences such as type of their desirable food, color and so on. One of these debatable areas is possibility of telling about personality and culture of others according to their clothes. I believe it would not be possible. This idea will be proven by looking at how this term of generalization can lead to prejudice and misleading. For one, in some religious due to their rules people have to put on specific clothes. Take Muslims as an example. Islamic women are told to wear some kinds of scarf to conceal their hair. On the other hand, societies are witnessed many terrorism attacks which are done by women wearing scarfs, showing by media. Following the theory of judging people according their clothes may generate the concept of all women wearing scarfs are terrorists. As this example shows, appearance of people is not an appropriate mirror for their character. Besides that, globalization makes it possible to find same merchandises at same time in different geographic places. For many youths, it is an important concern to follow latest trends. For instance, blue jeans is a piece of clothes which is commonplace in all societies and wide ranges of people regardless to gender, age, culture, education and personality wear it. Hence it cannot represent anything about people’s taught. following this example, clothes choice is not a reliable issue for categorizing people. As shown above, it is obvious that in the area of choosing what to wear factors such as price, availability, trend, etc; are more effective than way of thinking. It is recommended not to let such stereotypes effect on our choices of people for starting conversation and getting acquaintance.
Nowadays, it is
told
to be
many
prescribed way for predicting
people’s
characteristics base on their preferences such as type of their desirable food, color and
so
on. One of these debatable areas is possibility of telling about personality and culture of others according to their
clothes
. I believe it would not be possible. This
idea
will
be proven
by looking at how this term of generalization can lead to prejudice and misleading.

For one, in
some
religious due to their
rules
people
have to
put on specific
clothes
. Take Muslims as an example. Islamic women are
told
to wear
some
kinds of scarf to conceal their hair.
On the other hand
, societies
are witnessed
many
terrorism attacks which
are done
by women wearing scarfs, showing by media. Following the theory of judging
people
according their
clothes
may generate the concept of all women wearing scarfs are terrorists. As this example
shows
, appearance of
people
is not an appropriate mirror for their character.

Besides
that, globalization
makes
it possible to find same merchandises at same time in
different
geographic places. For
many
youths, it is an
important
concern to follow
latest
trends.
For instance
, blue jeans is a piece of
clothes
which is commonplace in all societies and wide ranges of
people
regardless to gender, age, culture, education and personality wear it.
Hence
it cannot represent anything about
people’s
taught.
following
this example,
clothes
choice is not a reliable issue for categorizing
people
.

As shown above, it is obvious that in the area of choosing what to wear factors such as price, availability, trend, etc; are more effective than way of thinking. It
is recommended
not to
let
such stereotypes effect on our choices of
people
for starting conversation and getting acquaintance.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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