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Some people say that it is important to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people say that it is important to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. v. 2
“Clothes should be used as cover on physical or nude bodies only and not on human’s soul”. It has been rightly stated by a famous author of ancient period. Certain individual perceive that clothing is a big source of revealing one’s innate characteristics and their cultural backgrounds. To a certain extent I go by the notion as the outfits they opt to wear depicts a lot about their personality and religion, but, majorly, I would not abide by the fact as globalisation has made akin types of clothing available in almost every part of the world To begin with, admittedly, the style of attire the people wrap around them can reveal quite a lot about the culture or personality which one has received naturally or in heredity. Every caste has specific ethnic dress set for both men and women which differentiates from the rest. For example, the Sikhs has the tradition of wearing turbans to cover their head in masculines and also, evidently, Muslim ladies’ wearing black veil or burkhas is yet another and true personification and justification of the fact. Furthermore, this makes future generation learn more about their own caste and heritage. Similarly, for personality traits, a person who loves wearing bright colours is considered by science to be displaying more happy and positive emotions. Also, someone who is more brand freak with clothes can possess the characteristic feature of show off. To illustrate, Ranveer Singh, famous Indian actor is very jolly by nature. One can easily mark out by his bizarre and bright colours that he prefers to wear. Having said that, I believe telling a lot about individuals nationality or caste is just another myth or judgmental statement by humans. A world that has been strongly hit by technology and internet and concepts like mondialisation, customers are just one click away from buying attires of their choice or interest irrespective to which country, nationality or community they belong or what physical character or qualities they possess. Moreover, it cannot be said that a person liking to carry dull colours like grey, black or dark blue are not happy or satisfied in their life or are passing through some depressing period. To exemplify, while in case for cultures, Sikh people these day have shown a keen interest in adopting British people’s attire specifically long over coats. And, hence, they are considered as the most stylish community because of this mix match fashion. Additionally, it has brought people more closer on world level and surged global unity. To conclude, albeit, perception of people about other individuals clothing, specially, their behaviour or nationality can prove to be right. It can be said so from their choice of attire passed on genetically by been born in a particular culture or by choice. Yet it is true disguise on other hand, as industrialisation has aided to shop similar products from all around the world at all places.
“Clothes should be
used
as cover on physical or nude bodies
only
and not on human’s soul”. It has been
rightly
stated by a
famous
author of ancient period. Certain individual perceive that clothing is a
big
source of revealing one’s innate characteristics and their cultural backgrounds. To a certain extent I go by the notion as the outfits they opt to wear depicts a lot about their personality and religion,
but
,
majorly
, I would not abide by the fact as
globalisation
has made akin types of clothing available in almost every part of the
world


To
begin
with,
admittedly
, the style of
attire
the
people
wrap around them can reveal quite a lot about the culture or personality which one has received
naturally
or in heredity. Every caste has specific ethnic dress set for both
men
and women which differentiates from the rest.
For example
, the Sikhs has the tradition of wearing turbans to cover their head in masculines and
also
,
evidently
, Muslim ladies’ wearing black veil or
burkhas
is
yet
another and true personification and justification of the fact.
Furthermore
, this
makes
future generation learn more about their
own
caste and heritage.
Similarly
, for personality traits, a person who
loves
wearing bright
colours
is considered
by science to be displaying more happy and
positive
emotions.
Also
, someone who is more brand freak with clothes can possess the characteristic feature of
show
off. To illustrate,
Ranveer
Singh,
famous
Indian actor is
very
jolly by nature. One can
easily
mark out by his bizarre and bright
colours
that he prefers to wear.

Having said that, I believe telling a lot about individuals nationality or caste is
just
another myth or judgmental statement by humans. A world that has been
strongly
hit by technology and internet and concepts like
mondialisation
, customers are
just
one click away from buying
attires
of their choice or interest irrespective to which country, nationality or community they belong or what physical character or qualities they possess.
Moreover
, it cannot
be said
that a person liking to carry dull
colours
like
grey
, black or dark blue are not happy or satisfied in their life or are passing through
some
depressing period. To exemplify, while in case for cultures, Sikh
people
these day
have shown a keen interest in adopting British
people’s
attire
specifically
long over coats. And,
hence
, they
are considered
as the most stylish community
because of this
mix match fashion.
Additionally
, it has brought
people
more closer
on world level and surged global unity.

To conclude
, albeit, perception of
people
about other individuals clothing,
specially
, their
behaviour
or nationality can prove to be right. It can
be said
so
from their choice of
attire
passed on
genetically
by
been born
in a particular culture or by choice.
Yet
it is true disguise on other hand, as
industrialisation
has aided to shop similar products from all around the world at all places.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that it is important to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
486 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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