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Some people say that in companies employees play important role and some people say that in companies customers play important role. Discuss both views and your opinion

Some people say that in companies employees play important role and some people say that in companies customers play important role. Discuss both views and your opinion ldXrQ
Most companies give better services to their customers and their employees. Some people believe that companies needs give more importance to their workers while others do not. This essay will discuss both views of the given argument and why customers are superior. Providing more attention; to employees than customers improve higher performance to companies. If companies give more facilities and build a better working atmosphere for their employees, workers get positive vides and become more satisfied with the administration. For example, the result of a survey, Apple provided good conditions for their employees and better salaries, which was a reason for their success. As one of the best companies in the world. In short, employees work hard, enhance their performance, and give their one hundred percent efforts to the companies otherwise, which is not possible if companies only listen to their customers.
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companies
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better services to their
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customers
and their
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employees
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people
believe that
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companies
needs
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give
more importance to their workers while others do not. This essay will discuss both views of the
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given
argument and why
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customers
are superior.

Providing more attention; to
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employees
than
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customers
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improve
higher performance to
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companies
. If
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companies
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give
more facilities and build a better working atmosphere for their
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employees
, workers
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get
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positive
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vides
and become more satisfied with the administration.
For example
, the result of a survey, Apple provided
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good
conditions for their
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employees
and better salaries, which was a reason for their success.
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As
one of the best
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companies
in the world. In short,
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employees
work
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hard
, enhance their performance, and
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give
their one hundred percent efforts to the
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companies
otherwise
, which is not possible if
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companies
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only
listen to their
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customers
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that in companies employees play important role and some people say that in companies customers play important role. Discuss both views and your opinion

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
142 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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