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Some people say that in all levels of education, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? v.2

It is argued that schools and colleges spend much of their time teaching facts and a very little emphasis is given to practical training. This essay agrees with this statement because institutes do not change their curriculum regularly and the educational societies think their primary job is to give theoretical knowledge. Firstly, educational bodies do not change syllabus every few years. This is because changing a syllabus requires a lot of efforts, and regular training needs to be provided to teachers to upgrade their skills. To avoid these situations, most educational boards prefer to continue teaching with the old curriculum. For example, a recent study by Indian Educational Society found that in the last 10 years, only 10% of the universities and educational boards upgraded their syllabus because they received funds from the government for the training of their teachers. Secondly, most educational institutions think that their main role is to impart theoretical knowledge. They think that students can learn practical skills when they start working in the industry. Therefore, schools and universities concentrate more on teaching theory subjects. To illustrate, while I studied engineering, I found that more credits were given to theoretical subjects as compared to practical ones. Therefore, I had to face a lot of difficulties, when I started my job. In conclusion, educational institutes give more emphasis to theory as compared to practical work because education experts do not change syllabus according to the latest advancements and educational societies believe that their main task is to teach theoretical concepts.
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educational
societies
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think
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theoretical
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bodies do not
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syllabus
every few years. This is
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because
changing a
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syllabus
requires
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a lot of
efforts, and regular training needs to
be provided
to teachers to upgrade their
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skills
. To avoid these situations, most
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educational
boards prefer to continue teaching with the
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old
curriculum.
For example
, a recent study by Indian
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Society found that in the last 10 years,
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only
10% of the universities and
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educational
boards upgraded their
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syllabus
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because
they received funds from the
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government
for the training of their teachers.

Secondly
, most
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educational
institutions
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think
that their main role is to impart
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theoretical
knowledge. They
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think
that students can learn
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practical
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skills
when they
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start
working in the industry.
Therefore
, schools and universities concentrate more on teaching theory subjects. To illustrate, while I studied engineering, I found that more credits were
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given
to
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theoretical
subjects as compared to
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practical
ones.
Therefore
, I had to face
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a lot of
difficulties, when I
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started
my job.

In conclusion
,
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educational
institutes give more emphasis to theory as compared to
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practical
work
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because
education experts do not
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change
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syllabus
according to the latest advancements and
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educational
societies believe that their main task is to teach
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theoretical
concepts.
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IELTS essay Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

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4 paragraphs
253 words
6.5
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