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People find it difficult to speak in front of the public or to give a presentation. How important is to speak well in public. Do you think children at school should be taught public speaking? v.1

People find it difficult to speak in front of the public or to give a presentation. How important is to speak well in public. Do you think children at school should be taught public speaking? v. 1
It is often argued that many people have difficulty in an oration before an audience. I believe public speaking is imperative in terms of having a successful career; moreover, schools should cultivate communication skills in students from an early age in order to build confidence in them. This essay will explore how these factors justify the importance of public speaking for both children and adults. Firstly, employers demand a person with good communication skills. Since many organizations are expanding their business to the international market, they require employees who can interact with the general public, competitors and, international delegates. Take an example of IBM Australia, which is recruiting one thousand customer sales representatives this year, and the only requirement is to communicate with people to sell their products. If anyone were lacking in this skill, it would be hard to survive in the workplace and job market as well. Thus, career prosperity is linked to better speaking and presentation skills. Secondly, minors should learn to address public confidently at school. This is to say, institutes should engage students in activities, which give them the opportunity to express ideas in front of others so that the cognitive capacity of students will increase. For instance, research conducted on the primary school students by the Child behaviour society, in the UK revealed that those students who take part in speech competitions, discussions and meetings are more likely to excel in their academic career because of having the skill to present their thoughts effectively. Hence, public speaking should be taught at school is fully justified. Finally, good public speaking is important to build a strong social circle. These skills allow people to catch attention by conveying a message more effectively as compared to the others, which resulted in better relations with others. To sum up, many people have difficulty to face public while speaking, I believe that this skill is extremely important to survive in any organization and to strengthen social circle. Also, schools should polish these skills, in order to build self-confidence in a child.
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argued that
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many
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people
have difficulty in an oration
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before
an audience. I believe
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public
speaking is imperative in terms of having a successful career;
moreover
,
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schools
should cultivate communication
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skills
in
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students
from an early age in order to build confidence in them. This essay will explore how these factors justify the importance of
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public
speaking for both children and adults.

Firstly
, employers demand a person with
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good
communication
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skills
. Since
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many
organizations are expanding their business to the international market, they require employees who can interact with the general
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public
, competitors and, international delegates. Take an example of IBM Australia, which is recruiting one thousand customer sales representatives this year, and the
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only
requirement is to communicate with
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people
to sell their products. If anyone were lacking in this
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skill
, it would be
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hard
to survive in the workplace and job market
as well
.
Thus
, career prosperity
is linked
to better speaking and presentation
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skills
.

Secondly
, minors should learn to address
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public
confidently
at
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school
. This is to say, institutes should engage
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students
in activities, which give them the opportunity to express
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ideas
in front of others
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so
that the cognitive capacity of
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students
will increase.
For instance
, research conducted on the primary
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school
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students
by the Child
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behaviour
society, in the UK revealed that those
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students
who
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take part
in speech competitions, discussions and meetings are more likely to excel in their academic career
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because
of having the
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skill
to present their thoughts
effectively
.
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,
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public
speaking should
be taught
at
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school
is
fully
justified.

Finally
,
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good
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public
speaking is
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important
to build a strong social circle. These
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skills
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allow
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people
to catch attention by conveying a message more
effectively
as compared to the others, which resulted in better relations with others.

To sum up,
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many
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people
have difficulty to face
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public
while speaking, I believe that this
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skill
is
extremely
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important
to survive in any organization and to strengthen social circle.
Also
,
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schools
should polish these
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skills
, in order to build self-confidence in a child.
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IELTS essay People find it difficult to speak in front of the public or to give a presentation. How important is to speak well in public. Do you think children at school should be taught public speaking? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
342 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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