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some people say that holding sports competitions can cause problems for host countries.Others disagress

some people say that holding sports competitions can cause problems for host countries. Others disagress 3aWxl
Hosting sports events is always an advangeous for the host nations. Some people concur that, if any country host any events then it can cause problems for the local community while others, believes that it is not true. This essay will discuss both sides of argument in details and provide as to why holding sports competitions is good for nations growth. On the first side of the argument, hosting events brings out the tourists in order to cherish their team. Additionally, host governement try to rebuilt their historical buildings so, that tourists can visit that places too. In this way host government can enhance their economy and spent this amount in the development of nation. Moreover, if host nation construct new buildings like hotels and bridges at the time of event, then it is beneficial for local people. As an example, Delhi Metro, Hotels, stadiums and Bridges all were constructed during the international games and today, it gives huge beneficts to the locality. On the opposite side, others, believes that if any nation host any sports events then, it can cause problems for the for the local peoples. During the events there is a huge rush of peoples and vehicles on the road and then it is difficult for the police officers to maintain the law and order. Furthermore, some people also believes that tourists may damage the historical buildings and when they leave the nation, then governement have to spent huge amount of money in the maintenance. For an instance, According to Indian News, 100 million dollars spent by the Indian governement in order to maintain the beauty of Taj Mehal which was damaged during the cricket world cup. According to my opinion, merits of hosting events outweight its demerits for the host nation. In order to, raise the economy and get name and fame in whole globe each nation should host sports competitions.
Hosting sports
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advangeous
for the
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host
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nations
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people
concur that, if any country

host any
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events
then it can cause problems for the local community while others, believes that it is
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not


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true
. This essay will discuss both sides of argument in
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details
and provide as to why holding
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sports


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competitions
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is
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good
for
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nations
growth.

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first
side of the argument, hosting
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events
brings out the tourists in
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order
to cherish their team.

Additionally
,
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host
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governement
try to
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rebuilt
their historical buildings
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so
, that tourists can visit that places too. In this way
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host
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government
can enhance their economy and spent this amount in the development of
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nation
.
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host
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nation
construct new buildings like hotels and bridges at the time of
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event
, then it is beneficial for local
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people
. As an example, Delhi Metro, Hotels, stadiums and Bridges all
were constructed
during the international games and
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today
, it gives huge
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beneficts
to the locality.

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nation
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host
any sports
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events
then, it can cause problems
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for the for the
local
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peoples
. During the
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events
there is a huge rush of
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and vehicles on the road and then it is difficult for the police officers to maintain the law and
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order
.
Furthermore
,
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some
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, then
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governement
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have to
spent huge amount of money in the maintenance. For an instance, According to Indian News, 100 million dollars spent by the Indian
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governement
in
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order
to maintain the beauty of
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Taj
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Mehal
which
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during the cricket world cup.

According to my opinion, merits of hosting
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events
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outweight
its demerits for the
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host
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nation
. In
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order
to, raise the economy and
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get
name and fame in whole globe each
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nation
should
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host
sports competitions.
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IELTS essay some people say that holding sports competitions can cause problems for host countries. Others disagress

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
315 words
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