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Some people say that having large number of traffic can create a major worry in some cities and countryside. In this essay the major reasons and the solutions will be discussed.

Some people say that having large number of traffic can create a major worry in some cities and countryside. In this essay the major reasons and the solutions will be discussed. 5BDxD
To begin with, in today’s world the traffic from vehicle is increasing day by day and causing some life-threatening issues. Such as air pollution, noise pollution, and accidents in cities and towns, while the major reason for this traffic is, our wants are getting higher day by day and we want more what we already have even the competition from others is one of the reasons for this cause. for instance, if a person already having one car but he like another car or he want to compare form other and show off, he will buy it, that will cause more cars on the roads and create more issues. On the other hand, despite having such issues it can be solve by following some practical steps which will help both the people living in those areas and the environment. Firstly, sharing the vehicle with other people is the one way to reduce the traffic on the roads along with that it will also help people to save money. Secondly, instead of using own car one can use public transport it will help the government to collect more fund that can be used to develop infrastructure of the city on top of that can also lower the number of vehicles running in city and towns. Finally, maintaining your mode of transport and servicing can create a big impact on the condition on the car and will create less pollution. To conclude, traffic is the utmost drawback in the cities and countryside, however, it can be fixed by maintaining some simple habits.
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with, in
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today
’s world the
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traffic
from vehicle is increasing day by day and causing
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some
life-threatening issues. Such as air pollution, noise pollution, and accidents in
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cities
and towns, while the major reason for this
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traffic
is, our wants are getting higher day by
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day and
we want more what we already have even the competition from others is one of the reasons for this cause.
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for
instance, if a person already having one
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car
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but
he like another
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car or
he
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want
to compare form
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other
and
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show
off, he will
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buy
it, that will cause more
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cars
on the roads and create more issues.

On the
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other
hand, despite having such issues it can be
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solve
by following
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some
practical steps which will
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help
both the
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people
living in those areas and the environment.
Firstly
, sharing the vehicle with
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other
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people
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the one way to
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traffic
on the roads along with that it will
also
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help
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people
to save money.

Secondly
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of using
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own
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car
one can
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use
public transport it will
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help
the
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government
to collect more fund that can be
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used
to develop infrastructure of the city
on top of that
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also
lower the number of vehicles running in city and towns.
Finally
, maintaining your mode of transport and servicing can create a
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big
impact on the condition on the
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car
and will create less pollution.

To conclude
,
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traffic
is the utmost drawback in the
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cities
and countryside,
however
, it can be
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fixed
by maintaining
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some
simple habits.
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IELTS essay Some people say that having large number of traffic can create a major worry in some cities and countryside. In this essay the major reasons and the solutions will be discussed.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
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