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Describe something new you learned about yourself in the last 2 years. How did you learn it? how has it been helpful?

Describe something new you learned about yourself in the last 2 years. How did you learn it? how has it been helpful? n1qWo

Human beings always try to learn something new and these investigations will help them to overcome various obstacles and become confident person. As for me last two years of my school life made me more sensible individual than I was before. My impression is that changing my learning place was helpful for me within past several years. As I mentioned in my previous essays I had no alter my school due to some serious reasons. When I studied in my school N: 8 i thought that my English is in a medial stage and there is no need to study hard. When I come to another school I understand that I should learn more and more. In my school where I was new pupil for the first time I met a boy named Sardor. He was excellent in English because he participated individual tutor. He was confident pupil and stayed calm always. Our English teacher always mention him as an idol student in the class. Then I figured out that if I try my best, I will be the one who achieved great results in English. My intention was to become an interpreter. We decided to work our weakness together. We began to learn the language together and it was helpful for both of us. My parents were glad to know that I found a friend and our interests were alike. One can ensure himself that he can do it from the bottom of heart. As a result of our collaboration I came to conclusion that these previous two years had reflected me brilliantly. When all is said and done, one can understand that working cooperatively was benefitial for me.

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My impression is that changing my learning place was helpful for me within past several years. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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school
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hard
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 I understand that I should learn more and more.

In my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
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was new
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 time I met a boy named Possible spelling mistake found.ArdorS ardorSandor
Sardor
. He was excellent in English This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he participated individual tutor. He Please check whether an article is missing: "was a confident" or "was an confident"was a confidentwas an confident
was confident
 pupil and stayed calm always.

Our English teacher always mention him as an idol student in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. Then I figured out that if I try my best, I will be the one who achieved great results in English.

My intention was to become an interpreter. We decided to work our weakness together.

We began to learn the language together and it was helpful for both of us. My parents were glad to know that I found a friend and our interests were alike.

One can ensure himself that he can do it from the bottom of heart.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result of our collaboration I came to conclusion that these previous two years had reflected me brilliantly
.

When all is said
 and done, one can understand that working cooperatively
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benefitial
 for me. 