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Some people say that food is our friend, while others think that it may become an enemy.

Some people say that food is our friend, while others think that it may become an enemy. jVmqM
Can we live without food? The answer is definitely "no". Food is essential to our body which is continually wasting and requires new energy. Experts say that food has some special powers that can control our lives, for better or for worse. To my mind, food is our friend if it is healthy and taken with due regard to the exercise and waste of the body. 1 believe that if you eat the right food, you can manage your mood and boost your brainpower. For example, when I feel blue, I treat myself to a bar of chocolate or an ice-cream and become more cheerful and energetic. When I am to take a test, I eat a handful of nuts or a banana because such food helps me concentrate. However, sometimes food may become a real enemy. Unfortunately, some people don't pay attention to what they eat. If their diet includes fast food and fizzy drinks, they can do much harm to their health. People who are fond of hamburgers and Coca-Cola often suffer from diabetes, cancer and tooth decay. Moreover, they may become overweight and even obese. To sum up, food that contains vitamins gives you a psychological lift and helps you improve your health. But food that has a hefty amount of chemical additives, fat, sugar or caffeine makes you fat and draws energy away from your brain. I strongly feel that if you take control of your food, you will be able to take control of your life.
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? The answer is definitely
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no
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.
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is essential to our body which
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is


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continually
wasting and requires new energy. Experts say that
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food
has
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some
special powers
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that


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can
control our
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lives
, for better or for worse.

To my mind,
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food
is our friend if it is healthy and taken with due regard to the exercise and waste

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of
the body. 1 believe that if you eat the right
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food
, you can manage your mood and boost your

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brainpower
.
For example
, when I feel blue, I treat myself to a bar of chocolate or an ice-cream
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and


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become
more cheerful and energetic. When I am to take a
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test
, I eat a handful of nuts or a
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banana


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because
such
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food
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helps
me concentrate.

However
,
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sometimes
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may become a real enemy. Unfortunately,
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people
don't pay

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attention
to what they eat. If their diet includes
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fast
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and fizzy drinks, they can do much
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harm


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to
their health.
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who are fond of hamburgers and Coca-Cola
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often
suffer from diabetes,

cancer and tooth decay.
Moreover
, they may become overweight and even obese.

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food
that contains vitamins gives you a psychological lift and
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helps
you
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improve
your

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health
.
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But
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food
that has a hefty amount of chemical additives,
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fat
, sugar or caffeine
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makes
you
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fat


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and
draws energy away from your brain. I
strongly
feel that if you take control of your
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food
,
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you


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will
be able to take control of your life.
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IELTS essay Some people say that food is our friend, while others think that it may become an enemy.

Essay
  American English
16 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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