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Should rich countries help pooer ones? what is your opinion? you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experiecne and support your arguments with examples.

Should rich countries help pooer ones? what is your opinion? you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experiecne and support your arguments with examples. lLg9w
It may indeed to be true to say that, people who live in under develop countries face so many problem, such as they have health issues. Secondly they have economic problems. On the other hand wealthy nations do not worry about their social circumstance as much as poor states. So, on certain level they have able to help under develop territories. In this easy i am going to examine both positive or negative side of these aid. Firstly, states who have a improve economic and health system. They do not worry about the patty day to day life issues. Meanwhile they invest their time in research work or other projects to gain more revenue and stable Government. Furthermore, they have enough resources to spend on social cause. For Example, help other states to remove any deadly disease from their territories. Moreover try to give tem better business opportunities. Offer scholarship to brilliant students. On the contrary, other people believe that, if poor countries will work hard with unity they will be surly change their circumstances. Because, if they rely on wealthy nations finical support, they must be demand something in return from poor countries. Namely to illustrate that, they will jeopardies the freedom of common people, while imposing unnecessary taxes. At the end, i may opine that, nations should stand up, upon there own feet’s. One example, God is very kind with his peoples, means every state have their reserves in form of gass oil, etc. All we need to discover them and take benefit from them. Eventually, unwealthy become wealthy after knowing his strength. In conclusion, It is a good gesture, to help other countries on humanitarian grounds. But if they seek anything in return this would be unacceptable, no matter how impressive offer receive from develop nations.
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indeed
to be true to say that,
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people
who
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live
in under develop
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countries
face
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so
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many problem
, such as they have health issues.
Secondly
they have economic problems. On the
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other
hand wealthy
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nations
do not worry about their social circumstance as much as poor
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states
.
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So
, on certain level they have able to
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help
under develop territories. In this easy
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i
am going to examine both
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positive
or
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negative
side of these aid.

Firstly
,
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states
who have
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a
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improve
economic and health system. They do not worry about the patty day to day life issues.
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Meanwhile
they invest their time in research work or
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other
projects to gain more revenue and stable
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Government
.
Furthermore
, they have
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enough
resources to spend on social cause.
For Example
,
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help
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other
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states
to remove any deadly disease from their territories.
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Moreover
try to give
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tem
better business opportunities. Offer scholarship to brilliant students.

On the contrary
,
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other
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people
believe that, if poor
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countries
will work
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hard
with unity they will be surly
Consider using a past participle here: "changed".
change
their circumstances.
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Because
, if they rely on wealthy
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nations
finical support, they
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must
be demand something in return from poor
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countries
.
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Namely
to illustrate that, they will
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jeopardies
the freedom of common
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people
, while imposing unnecessary taxes.

At the
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end
,
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may opine that,
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nations
should stand up, upon there
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own
feet’s. One example, God is
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very
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kind with
his
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peoples
, means every
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state
have their reserves in form of
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gass oil
, etc. All we need to discover them and take benefit from them.
Eventually
,
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unwealthy
become wealthy after knowing his strength.

In conclusion
, It is a
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good
gesture, to
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help
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other
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countries
on humanitarian grounds.
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But
if they seek anything in return this would be unacceptable, no matter how impressive offer receive from develop
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nations
.
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IELTS essay Should rich countries help pooer ones? what is your opinion? you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experiecne and support your arguments with examples.

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