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Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence, while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that extreme noise must be considered as an unlawful activity, while others believe that people should not be restricted to create noise. This essay agrees with the first given notion because deafening sound can result in permanent hearing loss in older generations and also causes sleep disturbance for many, thus it can be called a crime despite the belief among people that it is a human right to live on their own terms and playing loud music is a part of their lifestyle. Unreasonable sound can lead to sleep deprivation and also affect hearing ability of a person. In other words, playing loud music for a longer period of time, especially at night can be disturbing for others. Moreover, long exposure to extreme noise can hamper hearing ability and disturb the normal sleep cycle. For instance, according to a recent research conducted in Australia, it was found that older people are more likely to suffer from hearing loss if exposed to excessive noise pollution and deprives a person of his normal sleep. Hence, it is certainly a criminal offence to create noise pollution. On the other hand, several people think that it is their right to play loud music and live as per their choice. This is to say that restricting them from creating extreme sound is not right because they consider it is a violation of their rights. Furthermore, many say that it is a matter of perspective, therefore, different people have different lifestyles. To exemplify, several people prefer to live in a peaceful environment while it is disturbing for others. Thus, there should not be a limit to make noise as it is a part of an individual's lifestyle. To conclude, enormous sound pollution can lead to hearing loss and sleep disturbance, which makes it an unlawful act. However, others think it is completely normal to produce extreme noise because it is one of their human rights.
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is argued
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must
be considered
as an unlawful activity, while others believe that
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people
should not
be restricted
to create
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noise
. This essay
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agrees
with the
first
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given
notion
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because
deafening
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sound
can result in permanent hearing loss in older generations and
also
causes
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sleep
disturbance for
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many
,
thus
it can
be called
a crime despite the belief among
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people
that it is a human
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right
to
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live
on their
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own
terms and playing loud music is a part of their lifestyle.

Unreasonable
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sound
can lead to
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sleep
deprivation and
also
affect hearing ability of a person. In
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other
words, playing loud music for a longer period of time,
especially
at night can be disturbing for others.
Moreover
, long exposure to
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extreme
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noise
can hamper hearing ability and disturb the normal
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sleep
cycle.
For instance
, according to a recent research conducted in Australia, it
was found
that older
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people
are more likely to suffer from hearing loss if exposed to excessive
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noise
pollution and deprives a person of his normal
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sleep
.
Hence
, it is
certainly
a criminal
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offence
to create
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noise
pollution.

On the
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other
hand, several
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people
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think
that it is their
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right
to play loud music and
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live
as per their choice. This is to say that restricting them from creating
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extreme
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sound
is not
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right
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because
they consider it is a violation of their
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rights
.
Furthermore
,
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many
say that it is a matter of perspective,
therefore
,
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different
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people
have
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different
lifestyles. To exemplify, several
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people
prefer to
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live
in a peaceful environment while it is disturbing for others.
Thus
, there should not be a limit to
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make
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noise
as it is a part of an individual's lifestyle.

To conclude
, enormous
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sound
pollution can lead to hearing loss and
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sleep
disturbance, which
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makes
it an unlawful act.
However
, others
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think
it is completely normal to produce
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extreme
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noise
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because
it is one of their human
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rights
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence, while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
6.5
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