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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines Y5wK
It is certainly true that XXI century continues with developing high technology in all spheres. Totally, it is valuable for us. But it has also main privations. The digital technology is improving day by day, even smart things replace ordinarinesses. Likewise, people are aclimatizing to high-tech world. Following this, we would rather read electronic book than customary daily or periodicals. Owing to it has plenty of benefits such as you can avoid time-consuming to put it more precisely it is easy way to find anything more quickly than usual. On the contarary, it is generally agreed today that smartphones, laptops, tablets, and other portable devices emit intense blue light that can be extremely harmful to your eyes. Also small print, flickering picture and particularly read from the screen, as a rule, while sitting with their heads tilted. Tension in the neck can lead to vasospasm, blurred vision, and headaches. From these arguments i could conclude that we should use simple paper in order to keep our health. And less time reading e-books only use it when extremely need.
It is
certainly
true that XXI century continues with developing high technology in all spheres.
Totally
, it is valuable for us.
But
it has
also
main privations.

The digital technology is improving day by day, even smart things replace
ordinarinesses
.
Likewise
,
people
are
aclimatizing
to high-tech world. Following this, we would
rather
read electronic book than customary daily or periodicals. Owing to it has
plenty
of benefits such as you can avoid time-consuming to put it more
precisely
it is
easy
way to find anything more
quickly
than usual.

On the
contarary
, it is
generally
agreed
today
that smartphones, laptops, tablets, and other portable devices emit intense blue light that can be
extremely
harmful to your eyes.
Also
small
print, flickering picture and
particularly
read from the screen, as a
rule
, while sitting with their heads tilted. Tension in the neck can lead to
vasospasm
, blurred vision, and headaches.

From these arguments
i
could conclude that we should
use
simple paper in order to
keep
our health. And less time reading e-books
only
use
it when
extremely
need.
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IELTS essay Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines

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