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Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. What are the advantages and disadvantages? eMAB
The scarcity of natural fuels has been a vital topic in many countries, the scientist tries to find other resources which more usable for the long-term without damaging the environment. Fossil fuels mainly are used in every aspect of the human activities in every country, yet, the availability of these resources is limited which has led more and more countries to develop other safer energy. I personally belief that the use of alternative energies has more good impacts for the continuity of human life. There are several benefits which cannot be denied from renewable energies for the human life. Firstly, the use of environmentally friendly energies helps to reduce the environmental damage which could impact to the climate change and global warming. For example, the use of battery for the car electric in many countries where the drivers only need to charge it in some charge stations where the sun energy is used. Furthermore, the development of renewable energies resources is also used in the electric generator where the wind power and sea water play a vital role in this field. For example, Indonesian government cooperated with Japanese and Korean companies to build power plant such as Tanjung Jati A and B to generate electricity power for PLN supply. However, although the implementation of renewable energies development has many advantages to the society, yet, it also has some negative impacts. The development of the power plant will also give negative impacts for the environment and the society around the plant power is built due to the fact that it has hazardous waste. For example, the activities of fisherman who lives near to those plant face difficulties since the availability of fish is lessen since the negative effect of the plant waste. Yet, the problem only happens to the amount of people, but the benefits of these development is more for the long-term of people life. I personally belief that the development of this renewable energy’s resources is a good deal to face the limited availability of the natural resources. The government should support this development to create safest and friendly energies resources for the future generations such as water power and wind power in many sectors.
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, the scientist tries to find other resources which more usable for the long-term without damaging the environment. Fossil fuels
mainly
are
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used
in every aspect of the human activities in every
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country
,
yet
, the availability of these resources
is limited
which has led more and more
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countries
to develop other safer
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energy
. I
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impacts
for the continuity of human life.

There are several benefits which cannot
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renewable
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energies
for the human life.
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energies
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reduce
the environmental damage which could
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impact
to the climate
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change
and global warming.
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, the
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use
of battery for the car electric in
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countries
where the drivers
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charge stations where the sun
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energy
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development
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renewable
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energies
resources is
also
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used
in the electric generator where the wind
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power
and sea water play a vital role in this field.
For example
, Indonesian
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government
cooperated with Japanese and Korean
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companies
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power
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plant
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Tanjung
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Jati
A and B to generate electricity
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power
for PLN supply.

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energies
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for the environment and the society around the
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power
is built
due to the fact that it has hazardous waste.
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, the activities of fisherman who
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lives
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face difficulties since the availability of fish is lessen since the
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effect of the
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waste.
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life.

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development
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renewable
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energy’s
resources is a
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good
deal to face the limited availability of the natural resources. The
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government
should support this
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development
to create safest and friendly
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energies
resources for the future generations such as water
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power
and wind
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IELTS essay Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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