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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase is for governments to make it a legal requirement. VMwA
Nowadays with an increase in world population environmental problems are becoming one of the most urgent issues on our planet, one of them is pollution caused by domestic wastes. It is believed that recycling is the most appropriate solution, but some people argue that not enough amount of human waste is being recycled and the government should pass a law that forces the local population to recycle waste products. I do not agree with the statement, in my opinion, people should be engaged in garbage recycling at their own request, not because it is required to do so. On the one hand, recycling is the process, which allows reusing wastes in other ways. It is important to reuse some plastics because such sort of things does not decompose at all or it takes a very long time. In this regard, to protect our planet we must reprocess our wastes. Unfortunately, not everyone does recycle in everyday life, so some individuals suggest governments to make a law and that way will increase the recycling process. It can succeed if local people are required to pay taxes or even will be punished for not recycling their trash. In order not to have problems with the government, people will have to reprocess household wastes. On the other hand, there are other ways to encourage people to save the environment, for example, educate society and make clear its importance. If people are aware of the seriousness of this problem, they will act as they wish and involve in the process of recycling. In that way, there is no need for a legal requirement since everyone is taught to do reprocessing. In conclusion, I suppose, it will not lead to an environmental-friendly society if people are forced to recycle their waste. Instead, the consciousness of the community is important to achieve goals in a long-term way.
Nowadays with an increase in world population environmental problems are becoming one of the most urgent issues on our planet, one of them is pollution caused by domestic
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wastes
. It
is believed
that
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recycling
is the most appropriate solution,
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but
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some
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people
argue that not
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enough
amount of human
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waste
is
being recycled
and the
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government
should pass a law that forces the local population to recycle
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waste
products. I do not
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agree
with the statement, in my opinion,
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people
should
be engaged
in garbage
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recycling
at their
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own
request, not
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because
it
is required
to do
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so
.

On the one hand,
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recycling
is the process, which
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allows
reusing
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wastes
in other
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ways
. It is
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important
to reuse
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some
plastics
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because
such sort of things does not decompose at all or it takes a
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very
long time. In this regard, to protect our planet we
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must
reprocess our
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wastes
. Unfortunately, not everyone does recycle in everyday life,
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so
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some
individuals suggest
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governments
to
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make
a law and that
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way
will increase the
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recycling
process. It can succeed if local
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people
are required
to pay taxes or even will
be punished
for not
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recycling
their trash. In order not to have problems with the
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government
,
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people
will
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have to
reprocess household wastes.

On the other hand
, there are other
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ways
to encourage
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people
to save the environment,
for example
, educate society and
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make
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clear
its importance. If
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people
are aware of the seriousness of this problem, they will act as they wish and involve in the process of
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recycling
. In that
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way
, there is no need for a legal requirement since everyone
is taught
to
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do reprocessing
.

In conclusion
, I suppose, it will not lead to an environmental-friendly society if
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people
are forced
to recycle their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
.
Instead
, the consciousness of the community is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to achieve goals in a long-term
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
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