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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. 8AdV
Food shopping is increasingly becoming a controversial topic of debate in today's world. While some people choose to shop online, others still prefer the traditional way, by visiting the supermarket. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail. This essay will also discuss why the traditional way of food shopping is ultimately superior as compared to online shopping. Nowadays, more and more people are being attracted towards buying groceries online, as it has become a convenient way of shopping. They have strong reasons behind this, as it takes relatively lesser time to place an online order and then get it delivered as compared to shopping in a supermarket. For example, according to a recent study, the average delivery time for groceries has decreased significantly over the years to less than 30 minutes per order. Therefore, online food shopping is becoming increasingly popular among a certain group of people, from all around the world. Although online grocery shopping has certain advantages, visiting a supermarket can still be considered a better place to look for fresh groceries. It allows customers to choose from a vast variety of food items and to physically examine the freshness of the groceries before purchasing it and pick the best one possible, which is not always the case during online shopping. For instance, it is believed by many shoppers that buying groceries in a supermarket is better as far as the quality of food is concerned when compared with online shopping where it happens many times that customers are not fully satisfied with the food quality that is delivered. Hence, a growing consensus is developing among individuals who support the concept of offline shopping in supermarkets. To conclude, traditional shopping is being challenged by online shopping. This essay discussed why online shopping can be extremely convenient but why shopping at the supermarket in person is a better choice. In my opinion, visiting the supermarket is more beneficial than online shopping.
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choose to shop
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, others
still
prefer the traditional way, by visiting the supermarket. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail. This essay will
also
discuss why the traditional way of
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food
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shopping
is
ultimately
superior as compared to
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online
shopping.

Nowadays, more and more
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people
are
being attracted
towards buying groceries
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online
, as it has become a convenient way of
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. They have strong reasons behind this, as it takes
relatively
lesser time to place an
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online
order and then
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get
it delivered as compared to
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in a supermarket.
For example
, according to a recent study, the average delivery time for groceries has decreased
significantly
over the years to less than 30 minutes per order.
Therefore
,
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online
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food
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is becoming
increasingly
popular among a certain group of
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people
, from all around the world.

Although
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grocery
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has certain advantages, visiting a supermarket can
still
be considered
a better place to look for fresh groceries. It
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allows
customers to choose from a vast variety of
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food
items and to
physically
examine the freshness of the groceries
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before
purchasing it and pick the best one possible, which is not always the case during
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online
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.
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shoppers that buying groceries in a supermarket is better
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as
far as the quality of
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is concerned
when compared with
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online
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where it happens
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many
times that customers are not
fully
satisfied with the
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food
quality that
is delivered
.
Hence
, a growing consensus is developing among individuals who support the concept of offline
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shopping
in supermarkets.

To conclude
, traditional
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shopping
is
being challenged
by
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online
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shopping
. This essay discussed why
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online
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can be
extremely
convenient
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why
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at the supermarket in person is a better choice. In my opinion, visiting the supermarket is more beneficial than
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online
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shopping
.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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