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some people say that computers have made life esier

some people say that computers have made life esier GN78m
For our generation, computer had become one of the most essential parts of our daily life. Almost everything is done with a help of a computer, but different people have different opinions. Some people may consider that computer is the blessings of modern science which make our life more comfortable and handy while others oppose this concept but my choice is toward the former. Firstly, with computers, you can accessed to information become very easy. Many people do their jobs with the help of computer technology. For instance, a tax or document can be delivered faster than the past. This transportation is realised by computer technology. In earlier days, all the business transactional data was in form of files and managing these files and searching for information was a troublesome task. Computers have also helped students in a great way. Now, instead of going to teachers, they can browse for information online. They can find multiple research papers and discussion forum online to help finish their work. Secondly, another area where computers have helped us is in the communication field. It enables us to keep in touch with our loved once by so many ways such as email, online chatting, voice mail, video chat and various applications. Though I agree, we can contact each other by phone also, but phone calls are quite expensive especially international calls, but now we can contact our family and friends; and often see them without spending the extra penny. Emails also have help the business communication world and made them a formal mode of communication and documentation. Regarding the views on both sides, some people have doubtful opinions toward the essential impacts of computers to their life. They think computers reduce the family relationships and have made life more complex and tressful. However, I don’t think like that, and I won’t change my mind about how computers give us more of an easy life more than the old ways to do work. So despite some disadvantage, you cannot denied the benefits computers bring us. In conclusion, in my view and some reasons I mentioned above, I believe that computers are very important part of our life and made our lives easier, but we should be very careful about using them appropriately.
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Some
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people
may consider that computer is the blessings of modern science which
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make
our
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life
more comfortable and handy while others oppose this concept
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but
my choice is toward the former.

Firstly
, with computers, you can
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accessed
to information become
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very
easy.

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people
do their jobs with the
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help
of computer technology.
For instance
, a tax or document can
be delivered
faster than the past. This transportation is
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realised
by computer technology. In earlier days, all the business transactional data was in form of files and managing these files and searching for information was a troublesome task. Computers have
also
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helped
students
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in a great way
.
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Now
,
instead
of going to teachers, they can browse for information online. They can find multiple research papers and discussion forum online to
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help
finish their work.

Secondly
, another area where computers have
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helped
us is in the communication field. It enables us to
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keep
in touch with our
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loved
once by
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ways such as email, online chatting, voice mail, video chat and various applications. Though I
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agree
, we can contact each other by phone
also
,
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phone calls are quite expensive
especially
international calls,
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but
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now
we can contact our family and friends; and
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see
them without spending the extra penny. Emails
also
have
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help
the business communication world and made them a formal mode of communication and documentation.

Regarding the views on both sides,
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some
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people
have doubtful opinions toward the essential impacts of computers to their
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life
. They
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computers
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reduce
the family relationships and have made
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more complex and
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tressful
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, I don’t
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like that, and I won’t
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change
my mind about how computers give us more of an easy
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more than the
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old
ways to do work.
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despite
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disadvantage, you cannot
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the benefits computers bring us.

In conclusion
, in my view and
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reasons I mentioned above, I believe that computers are
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important
part of our
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life
and made our
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lives
easier,
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we should be
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careful about using them
appropriately
.
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IELTS essay some people say that computers have made life esier

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
377 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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