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Hydro hysteria panic sstudentsan won e rap vi ho judi oc jv dec isi.

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In this contemporary era, due to advancement of technology crops are grown fastly with best qualities like genetically modified crops but some reckon that this effects have a good improvements; whereas, others claim that it has and adverse impact. I would like to discuss both these views in trail paragraphs with my clear position. To begin with, there are several positive sides of having technological and scientific advance. Foremost one is, less starving of food because farmers get much help by using this technology in fertilizers which help them to grow crops with rapids speed. Thus, developing countries do not have to face shortage of food. In addition to this, GM crop is the one type of crops on which no natural calamities effect on it. As a result, there is much possibilities of crops are not get waste. Finally, farmers can earn more money since they can grow more and more crop and they could sell it in market by using fertilizers and pesticides. Therefore, consumers buy crops and farmers earn more as well as they improve their lifestyle. On stark contrary, there are numbers of drawbacks of technology and scientific advances on earth. Firstly, using chemicals in farm in order to grow crops owing to this it will give more output but it come up with some issues like cancer. To illustrate, according to the survey conducted by the Time Of India in which they concluded that, there had been 37% of people were suffering from cancer out of 100% and they are only because of chemicals like pesticides used in farms. As a consequence, adverse effects on human health and there might be increase in death ratio. Furthermore, if increase in consumption of chemicals. Hence, there might be in future lands will eradicate it's natural sources and it will not be cultivated proper and stop crops production. In conclusion, it is inferred that, technology and scientific advancement improve crops production such as shortage of food, no wastage, earn more money; However, I believe that, problems are very critical like cancer destroy land and many more.
In this contemporary era, due to advancement of
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technology
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crops
are grown
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fastly
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with best
qualities like
genetically
modified
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crops
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but
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some
reckon that
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this
effects have a
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good
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improvements
; whereas, others claim that it has and adverse impact. I would like to discuss both these views in trail paragraphs with my
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clear
position.

To
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begin
with, there are several
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positive
sides of having technological and scientific advance. Foremost one is, less starving of food
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because
farmers
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get
much
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help
by using this
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technology
in fertilizers which
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help
them to grow
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crops
with rapids speed.
Thus
,
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developing countries
do not
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have to
face shortage of food.
In addition
to this, GM
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crop
is the one type of
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crops
on which no natural calamities effect on it.
As a result
,
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there is much possibilities
of
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crops
are not
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get
waste.
Finally
, farmers can earn more money since they can grow more and more
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crop and
they could sell it in market by using fertilizers and pesticides.
Therefore
, consumers
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buy
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crops
and farmers earn more
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
well as they
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improve
their lifestyle.

On stark contrary, there are numbers of drawbacks of
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technology
and scientific advances on earth.
Firstly
, using chemicals
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in farm in
order to grow
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crops
owing to this it will give more output
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but
it
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come
up with
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some
issues like cancer. To illustrate, according to the survey conducted by the Time Of India in which they concluded that, there had been 37% of
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people
were suffering from cancer out of
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100% and
they are
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only
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because
of chemicals like pesticides
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used
in farms. As a consequence, adverse effects on human health and there might be increase in death ratio.
Furthermore
, if increase in consumption of chemicals.
Hence
, there might be in future lands will eradicate
Did you mean "its natural sources"?
it's natural sources
and it will not
be cultivated
proper and
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stop
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crops
production.

In conclusion
, it
is inferred
that,
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technology
and scientific advancement
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improve
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crops
production such as shortage of food, no wastage, earn more money;
However
, I believe that, problems are
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very
critical like cancer
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destroy
land and
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many
more.
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IELTS essay Hydro hysteria panic sstudentsan won e rap vi ho judi oc jv dec isi.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
348 words
5.5
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