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Many people think that e-books will replace traditional books and magazines soon. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that e-books will replace traditional books and magazines soon. OVmjE
Electronic books and media are widely believed to make the popularity of newspapers and articles, that are published in paper, extremely low. I am, personally, inclined to say that e-books and other modern mass media will totally overcome the paper based ones. There exist a myriad of factors which highly demonstrate the reason why electronic books and media overtake traditional pieces of writing, such as newspapers and magazines. Initially, individuals are not required to pay for articles, since the data offered by the Internet is totally free. While there are two options in terms of payment, most of the people are expected to choose the non-payment one. Thereby, it would be one of the most crucial factor that changes the role of convential ones. Secondly and more importantly, even the government would highly support the idea to make the modern type of articles and media common amongst population. This is because, the production of paper based newspapers and magazines needs the use of trees in large quantities. Therefore, many states, nowadays, suffer from deforestation which partly emerged because of these. The government can decrease the amount of books that are produced through conventional methods and make the utilization of e-books more popular. Besides, reading via devices in public areas and transports appreciated much owing to convenience and comfort. In simple terms, in crowded places it is easier to read electronic books compared to traditional one. To conclude, conventional newspapers and magazines are claimed to be overtaken by electronic books and media. I highly endorse this belief, as the modern type of articles offer much convenience as well as safety to the nature; and, even it costs nothing in terms of money
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and
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, that
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low.

I am,
personally
, inclined to say that e-books and other modern mass
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media
will
totally
overcome the paper based ones.

There exist a myriad of factors which
highly
demonstrate the reason why
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electronic
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books
and
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media
overtake traditional pieces of writing, such as
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newspapers
and magazines.
Initially
, individuals are not required to pay for
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articles
, since the data offered by the Internet is
totally
free. While there are two options in terms of payment, most of the
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people
are
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expected
to choose the non-payment one. Thereby, it would be one of the most crucial factor that
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changes
the role of
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convential
ones.

Secondly
and more
importantly
, even the
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government
would
highly
support the
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idea
to
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make
the modern type of
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articles
and
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media
common amongst population. This is
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because
, the production of paper based
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newspapers
and magazines needs the
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use
of trees in large quantities.
Therefore
,
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many
states, nowadays, suffer from deforestation which partly emerged
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because
of these. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can decrease the amount of
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books
that
are produced
through conventional methods and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the utilization of e-books more popular.
Besides
, reading via devices in public areas and transports appreciated much owing to convenience and comfort. In simple terms, in crowded places it is easier to read
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electronic
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books
compared to traditional one.

To conclude
, conventional
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newspapers
and magazines
are claimed
to
be overtaken
by
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electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and
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media
. I
highly
endorse this belief, as the modern type of
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articles
offer much convenience
as well
as safety to the nature; and, even it costs nothing in terms of
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money
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IELTS essay Many people think that e-books will replace traditional books and magazines soon.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
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