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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Throughout the years, TV entertainment programmes have helped shaped the society’s pop-culture. Whilst other believe that TV programmes must be used to educate viewers regarding critical social issues, others think that it should only be used to entertain viewers. This essay will argue that the use of TV entertainment programmes should be absolutely aimed to educate viewers about important social issues that are pertinent in today’s modern society. Some viewers believe that TV programmes are made to entertain people and to relieve their stress. This is evident with the rise of reality shows in every channel networks as more and more people got interested and amused to watch other people’s lives. A good example of this is the reality TV show Keeping up with the Kardashians. This show has been on air for 15 years and has amassed a cult following from numerous people around the globe. In addition, according to survey conducted by AGB Nielsen, people watch tv programmes, such as reality shows, to divert their attention from their own reality and forget their problems even in a short while. Conversely, TV entertainment programmes have huge impact to the viewers. They have the power to influence the perception and mentality of the audiences. For example, In 1986, a documentary was launched in television to show the killings of whale sharks in the ocean. Through that documentary, social awareness was raised and several people had condemned the killings which led to an international law that banned the killing activities of whale sharks. Furthermore, TV entertainment programmes can also educate the younger generation by emphasizing the importance of social and cultural history which they can see in televisions such as watching educational documentaries which help them in their studies as well. In conclusion, TV programmes has the power to not only provide entertainment, but they can certainly be used to educate the minds of many viewers about social issues that are timely and relevant in today’s modern society.
Throughout the years, TV entertainment
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programmes
have
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helped
shaped the society’s pop-culture. Whilst other believe that TV
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programmes
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must
be
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used
to
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educate
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viewers
regarding critical
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social
issues, others
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think
that it should
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only
be
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used
to entertain
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viewers
. This essay will argue that the
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use
of TV entertainment
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programmes
should be
absolutely
aimed to
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educate
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viewers
about
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important
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social
issues that are pertinent in
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today
’s modern society.

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Some
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viewers
believe that TV
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programmes
are made
to entertain
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people
and to relieve their
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stress
. This is evident with the rise of
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reality
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shows
in every channel networks as more and more
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people
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got
interested and amused to
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watch
other
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people’s
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lives
. A
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good
example of this is the
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reality
TV
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show
Keeping up with the
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Kardashians
. This
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show
has been on air for 15 years and has amassed a cult following from numerous
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people
around the globe.
In addition
, according to survey conducted by AGB Nielsen,
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people
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watch
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tv
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programmes
, such as
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reality
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shows
, to divert their attention from their
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own
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reality
and forget their problems even in a short while.

Conversely
, TV entertainment
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programmes
have huge impact to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
viewers
. They have the power to influence the perception and mentality of the audiences.
For example
, In 1986, a documentary
was launched
in television to
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show
the killings of whale sharks in the ocean. Through that documentary,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
awareness
was raised
and several
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people
had condemned the killings which led to an international law that banned the killing activities of whale sharks.
Furthermore
, TV entertainment
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programmes
can
also
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educate
the younger generation by emphasizing the importance of
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social
and cultural history which they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
in televisions such as watching educational documentaries which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them in their studies
as well
.

In conclusion
, TV
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programmes
has the power to not
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only
provide entertainment,
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but
they can
certainly
be
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used
to
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educate
the minds of
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many
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viewers
about
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social
issues that are timely and relevant in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s modern society.
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IELTS essay Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. with this statement?

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