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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some people's belief, TV shows should display details that are mainly related to social issues. I side with the viewpoint that it is not necessary to educate individuals through mass media. On the one hand, the humor essence of TV shows is curtailed fundamentally as they lose the entertaining factor. First, television programs help people to relieve stress as well as bring joy to us; therefore, they are must for communities to escape from fast-paced world where many are cope with responsibilities, expectations and pressures.

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