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capital punishment helps to reduce crimes and violence in a society to what extend do you agree with this statement?

As we all know crimes are bad customs which may take his/her life. And talking about capital punishment is a death penalty. It is pain full and emotional about life. In another word it is death. I totally agree capital punishment helps to overcome the crimes and violence in a nation. But he/she has not become by i will be a murder, thief, killer, gangster and other crimes works. Because of their condition and life. thoroughly, we all are human beings we all have different life styles and motives. for eg: We all want to eat healthy food, live a luxurious life and fulfilling our desires.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 we all know crimes are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 customs which may take his/her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. And talking about capital punishment is a death penalty. It is pain full and emotional about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. In another word it is death. I totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 capital punishment This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to overcome the crimes and violence in a nation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 he/she has not become by Did you mean “I”?I
i
 will be a murder, thief, killer, gangster and other crimes works. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of their condition and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Thoroughly
thoroughly
, we all are human beings we all have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
This noun is normally spelled as one word.lifestyles
life styles
 and motives. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.For
for
Possible spelling mistake found.e.g.EGexlegEUkg
eg
: We all want to eat healthy food, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a luxurious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 and fulfilling our desires. 