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capital punishment helps to reduce crimes and violence in a society to what extend do you agree with this statement?

As we all know crimes are bad customs which may take his/her life. And talking about capital punishment is a death penalty. It is pain full and emotional about life. In another word it is death. I totally agree capital punishment helps to overcome the crimes and violence in a nation. But he/she has not become by i will be a murder, thief, killer, gangster and other crimes works. Because of their condition and life. thoroughly, we all are human beings we all have different life styles and motives. for eg: We all want to eat healthy food, live a luxurious life and fulfilling our desires.
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life
. And talking about capital punishment is a death penalty. It is pain full and emotional about
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life
. In another word it is death. I
totally
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capital punishment
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will be a murder, thief, killer, gangster and other crimes works.
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: We all want to eat healthy food,
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IELTS essay capital punishment helps to reduce crimes and violence in a society

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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