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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we do not need. Others say that advertising

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we do not need. Others say that advertising 856KP

Advertisement is a process whereby goods and services are brought to the awareness of the general public. While advertisements implore people to purchase items they do not plan for, I will argue that it informs the masses about new products that may ameliorate our standard of living. On the one hand, advertisements inform the world about new products introduced to the market, as well as highlighting their key features. For instance, I personally became aware of the new Samsung Galaxy Pro 'X' via a television advert, more so excited was when I knew about it water resistant properties. In today's contemporary times when the cost of living is extremely inflated, adverts compare the prices of different manufactured commodities, making individuals most likely to get what they can afford. On the flip side, it is popularly stated that whatever has an advantage has their corresponding downside. One major disadvantage of frequent advertisements is the fact that impulsive spendings will be on the increase, as individuals who lack self control may not be able to resist buying whatever is being commercialized. A vivid illustration is my younger brother who often goes for any electronic device being advertised on social media, that singular habit keeps him broke a few times, also fund kept for important projects are often spent on the go. In conclusion, while advertisements make people at large to acquire irrelevant goods and services, I believe that the knowledge of new products in the market makes life more fun and enjoyable.

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