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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. PPww
Advertising continues to be a controversial issue in the world. The opinion of people is divided on whether advertising encourages us to buy things that people really do not need or it gives information about new products that may improve our lives. Although I think it helps to buy a new thing, yet it improves ours lives. This essay is going to scrutinize in upcoming paragraphs. There are lots of factors that account for why individuals believe advertisements motivate people to buy unnecessary things. Firstly,
Advertising continues to be a controversial issue in the world. The opinion of
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people
is divided
on whether advertising encourages us to
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buy
things that
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people
really
do not need or it gives information about new products that may
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improve
our
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lives
. Although I
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think
it
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helps
to
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buy
a new thing,
yet
it
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improves
ours
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lives
. This essay is going to scrutinize in upcoming paragraphs.

There are lots of factors that account for why individuals believe advertisements motivate
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people
to
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buy
unnecessary things.
Firstly
,
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IELTS essay Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
85 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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