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Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? KxLM

Advertising is a big platform to market a new product for the introduction and older for its sustainability. Nowadays advertising makes a huge impact on buying new things which might we do not need in actual. Although advertising gives us information about new products to improve our lives. Moreover, I do agree with the first statement that advertising forces us to buy new things. I can support my views through the followings aspect I am going to explain in further paragraphs. To begin with, advertising modes are newspaper, television, and online. Internet is the epoch of technology. 99% of the population is surfing the internet while using WhatsApp, Instagram, Facebook, etc. when people scroll over these platforms they will get the banners, notifications, and badges of different products with beautiful layouts and presentation. Secondly, they provide you great offers by reducing their price from actual prices to play with the human psychology of paying less for more. In respect of this, people usually spend more even when they do not require it. I can support this statement with an example that one day my husband surfing online. He got an advertisement for an iPhone at a discounted price than its usual price and he bought it immediately. having a phone already he thought otherwise he lost the deal. To conclude, Advertising a product increases the value of the product and enhances the tendency to purchase a product whether people required it or not.

Advertising is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 platform to market a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 for the introduction and older for its sustainability. Nowadays advertising This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 a huge impact on buying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 things which might we do not need in actual. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 advertising gives us information about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. Moreover
, I do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the first
 statement that advertising forces us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 things. I can support my views through the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "followings'" or "following's"?followings'following's
followings
 aspect I am going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 in further
 paragraphs.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, advertising modes are newspaper, television, and online. Internet is the epoch of technology. 99% of the population is surfing the internet while using WhatsApp, Instagram, Facebook, etc. when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 scroll over these platforms they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the banners, notifications, and badges of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 layouts and presentation.

Secondly
, they provide you great offers by reducing their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
 from actual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
prices
 to play with the human psychology of paying less for more. In respect of this, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
usually
 spend more even when they do not require it. I can support this statement with an example that one day my husband surfing online. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 an advertisement for an iPhone at a discounted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
 than its usual Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).price, and
price and
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it immediately. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHaving
having
 a phone already he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
otherwise
 he lost the deal.

To conclude
, Advertising a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 increases the value of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 and enhances the tendency to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 whether This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 required it or not. 