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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? 7lj2
Over the course of modern history, there has been a noticeable increase in number of people living in central and huge cities. This increase has entailed various drawbacks in daily life. Some observers suggest that it is the role of governments to persuade people to shift their living centres to more peripheral habitats. In this essay I will address the problems faced by city’s citizens, as well as the possible advantages of the suggestion given previously. Over the past century, number of the indwellers within large cities has been increasing significantly. Some people have complained about different problems resulting from living in these crowded places. First, as a result of huge numbers of private vehicles, there is a massive increase in fumes emitted into the air, which eventually cause damage to the general health. At the same time, this flood of private cars results in traffic jams and massive loss in work hours. Moreover, one can mention the high rental prices and limited employment availabilities amongst other social and living problems within the boundaries of a large city. Recently, a few suggestions have been made. One of these suggestions attributes a major part of responsibility to the governments, claiming that prompting people to move to regional towns could mitigate the problems mentioned previously. I personally would subscribe to such a claim if authorities made sufficient efforts to develop remote towns including standardized living buildings, optimal infrastructures and modern public transportation. In conclusion, as I have mentioned above, I am convinced that If governments invest in many aspects of small towns, unignorable amount of people will prefer to leave their large cities seeking tranquility and high-quality lives. This will undoubtedly might solve part of the problems suffered by large cities.
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people
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in central and huge
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cities
. This increase has entailed various drawbacks in daily life.
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governments
to persuade
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people
to shift their
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living
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centres
to more peripheral habitats. In this essay I will address the
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problems
faced by city’s citizens,
as well
as the possible advantages of the suggestion
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given
previously.

Over the past century, number of the
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indwellers
within
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large
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cities
has been increasing
significantly
.
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Some
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people
have complained about
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different
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problems
resulting from
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living
in these crowded places.
First
,
as a result
of huge numbers of private vehicles, there is a massive increase in fumes emitted into the air, which
eventually
cause damage to the general health. At the same time, this flood of private cars results in traffic jams and massive loss in work hours.
Moreover
, one can mention the high rental prices and limited employment availabilities amongst other social and
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living
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problems
within the boundaries of a
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large
city.

Recently, a few suggestions have
been made
. One of these suggestions attributes a major part of responsibility to the
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governments
, claiming that prompting
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people
to
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move
to regional towns could mitigate the
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problems
mentioned previously. I
personally
would subscribe to such a claim if authorities made sufficient efforts to develop remote towns including standardized
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living
buildings, optimal infrastructures and modern public transportation.

In conclusion
, as I have mentioned above, I
am convinced
that If
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governments
invest in
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many
aspects of
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small
towns,
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unignorable
amount of
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people
will prefer to
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leave
their
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large
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cities
seeking tranquility and high-quality
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lives
. This will
undoubtedly
might solve part of the
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problems
suffered by
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large
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cities
.
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IELTS essay People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

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  American English
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289 words
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