Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. 33kb

influenced by machines, technologies and so on. For example, my sister has two children and both of them have a tablet. They prefer to play with their tablet rather to talk with parents or even watch TV. New technologies like smart phone, tablet and so on, causes people prefer to spend their time to play with them or surf on the internet. Secondly, unfortunately, most of the families experience economic pressure. Therefore, we see some parents who have to work in two or more workplace or work at weekends. All these causes, parents become more tried and have not any time to talk with children or even they have not time for themselves. Finally, every countries have some good cultures, but these days we see our new generation believe we should forget these kind of culture because they are old. We see they become more impolite and do not obey families rules. Therefore, other members of a family prefer to keep their boundaries and reduce their relationships. To sum up, we can deny it is our fault as parents that our family member do not like to communicate with each other. However, we can change this situation and start a new life. We can settle down some family gathering like a barbeque on weekends, or go to picnic or camping. All outdoors activities cause people have some desire to speak and build a relationship base on their commons.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterInfluenced
influenced
 by machines, technologies and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. For example
, my sister has two children and both of them have a tablet. They prefer to play with their tablet rather
 to talk with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 or even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 TV. New technologies like smart phone, tablet and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on, causes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 prefer to spend their time to play with them or surf on the internet.

Secondly
, unfortunately, most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
 experience economic pressure. Therefore
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 who This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 work in two or more workplace or work at weekends. All these causes, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 become more tried and have not any time to talk with children or even they have not time for themselves.

Finally
, every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "country"?country
countries
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 cultures, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 these days we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 our new generation believe we should forget Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?this kindthese kinds
these kind
 of culture This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 they become more impolite and do not obey You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
. Therefore
, other members of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 their boundaries and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 their relationships.

To sum up, we can deny it is our fault as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 that our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 member do not like to communicate with each other. However
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 this situation and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 a new life. We can settle down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 gathering like a Possible spelling mistake found.barbecue
barbeque
 on weekends, or go to picnic or camping. All outdoors activities cause This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 desire to speak and build a relationship base on their commons. 