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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. 5V0m
The amount of air traffic drastically rising over recent years around the world results in several environmental problems. One of the major factors has been an increase of low-cost airlines. Whilst many suggest that government should raise the tax on air transportation to alleviate the problem, I think this is not a resilient solution and might cause other issues. First of all, to increase airline taxes in merely fixing the problem at the end of the note. If there are no regulations placed strictly on airport constructions, many aviation businesses may not have awareness of the impact of construction on environments and only focus on gaining more profits. To illustrate, there was one of the airports in my country which was constructed on the former wetlands against a lot of criticism by intention to establish the world-class international airport. Even if this case brought skeptical aspects towards the government, there have always been similar projects being proposed so many times. Furthermore, including tax may cause a higher flight ticket cost and subsequently lead to other traffics issues. This solution can ease the air traffic in short term, but it contributes to traffic congestion during holiday season. Take New Year holiday in the past for example. When low-cost airlines were limited, there were many people who could not afford flight tickets traveling by personal cars or land transports which caused heavy traffics over the period of vacation. In conclusion, there are several reasons why introducing high tax may not the right way to solve the problem at its root and potentially results in heavy land traffic. I believe that we can explore the alternative ways that allow us to enjoy low-cost flights and reduce issues simultaneously.
The amount of air
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traffic
drastically
rising over recent years around the world results in several environmental
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problems
. One of the major factors has been an increase of low-cost airlines. Whilst
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many
suggest that
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government
should raise the
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tax
on air transportation to alleviate the
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problem
, I
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think
this is not a resilient solution and might cause other issues.
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First of all
, to increase airline
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taxes
in
merely
fixing the
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problem
at the
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end
of the note. If there are no regulations placed
strictly
on airport constructions,
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many
aviation businesses may not have awareness of the impact of construction on environments and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
focus on gaining more profits. To illustrate, there was one of the airports in my country which
was constructed
on the former wetlands against
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a lot of
criticism by intention to establish the world-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
international airport. Even if this case brought skeptical aspects towards the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
, there have always been similar projects
being proposed
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so
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many
times.
Furthermore
, including
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tax
may cause a higher flight ticket cost and
subsequently
lead to other
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traffics
issues. This solution can
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ease
the air
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traffic
in short term,
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but
it contributes to
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traffic
congestion during holiday season. Take New Year holiday in the past
for example
. When low-cost airlines
were limited
, there were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who could not afford flight tickets traveling by personal cars or land transports which caused heavy
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traffics
over the period of vacation.
In conclusion
, there are several reasons why introducing high
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tax
may not the right way to solve the
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problem
at its root and
potentially
results in heavy land
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traffic
. I believe that we can explore the alternative ways that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
us to enjoy low-cost flights and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
issues
simultaneously
.
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IELTS essay Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.

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