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Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both sides and give your opinion base on your experience. v.4

Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. v. 4
Due to the modern technology, it is no longer required for people to learn a handwriting skill. However, others still believe that handwriting is an important ability to do different multifarious jobs. The proficiency of handwriting has been changed by computer keyboard which provide letters, and numbers. On the other hand, handwriting is extremely prominent in our daily life activity, and not only in the office, such as mothers at home or in a social gathering, students, and teachers at school. Nowadays computer has replaced handwriting for almost all kinds of job in office. For instance; typing letters, doing finance report, as well as making charts. In spite of it, not all financial statements can be undertaken by computer. Still, people need handwriting abilities to write a financial report. The major cause of this is if all accounting can be typed on computers, imposture can always happen. Whereas, if it is written in a book manually, later the one who meant to do the correction, he or she may not use correction pen, but cross out one line so that the auditor would be able to see if it is true or tricky. In contrast, the ability to have a good writing is still necessary in our daily life. For examples: parents at home, mothers in a social gathering, students, and teachers in class are required to write, whether on a paper, on blackboard or whiteboard, as well as in a book. Students who have bad handwriting might get some difficulties in a written test. A teacher or an examiner who has minus eyes will not be able to check the student's work properly. As a result, the student might get a bad score due to ugly handwriting. To come to a conclusion, in my opinion, although handwriting is substituted by computers, Nonetheless, handwriting skill will be required in any action, whether in office as well as in our daily life, for examples; in writing a financial report still better to use handwriting in order to prevent from camouflage statements. While in school, teachers and students must be able to have the ability of handwriting so that everything runs well.
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people
to learn a
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handwriting
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skill
.
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, others
still
believe that
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handwriting
is an
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important
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ability
to do
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different
multifarious jobs. The proficiency of
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handwriting
has been
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changed
by computer keyboard which provide letters, and numbers.
On the other hand
,
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handwriting
is
extremely
prominent in our daily life activity, and not
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only
in the office, such as mothers at home or in a social gathering,
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students
, and
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teachers
at school.

Nowadays computer has replaced
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handwriting
for almost all kinds of job in office.
For instance
; typing letters, doing finance report, as
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well
as making charts.
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In spite of
it, not all financial statements can be undertaken by computer.
Still
,
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people
need
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handwriting
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abilities
to write a financial report. The major cause of this is if all accounting can
be typed
on computers, imposture can always happen. Whereas, if it
is written
in a book
manually
, later the one who meant to do the correction, he or she may not
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use
correction pen,
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but
cross out one line
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so
that the auditor would be able to
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see
if it is true or tricky.

In contrast
, the
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ability
to have a
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good
writing is
still
necessary in our daily life. For examples: parents at home, mothers in a social gathering,
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students
, and
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teachers
in
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class
are required
to write, whether on a paper, on blackboard or whiteboard, as
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well
as in a book.
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Students
who have
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bad
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handwriting
might
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get
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some
difficulties in a written
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test
. A
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teacher
or an examiner who has minus eyes will not be able to
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check
the student's work
properly
.
As a result
, the
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student
might
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get
a
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bad
score due to ugly handwriting.

To
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come
to a conclusion, in my opinion, although
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handwriting
is substituted
by computers, Nonetheless,
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handwriting
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skill
will
be required
in any action, whether in office as
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well
as in our daily life, for examples; in writing a financial report
still
better to
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use
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handwriting
in order to
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prevent
from camouflage statements. While in school,
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teachers
and
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students
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must
be able to have the
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ability
of
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handwriting
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so
that everything runs
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well
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
Language is the blood of the soul into which thoughts run and out of which they grow.
Oliver Wendell Holmes

IELTS essay Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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