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Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both and give your opinion base on your experience. v.3

Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. v. 3
Technology accessed all our daily life, at home, work even in schools. It changed a lot and helped this generation, in education and especially in handwriting skills. Some people think that handwriting skills aren’t important to be learned these days, others believe that handwriting is still necessary and helps a lot. Way of writing changed in several institutions and jobs, it turned the way of studying and working to be easier with less errors. First, the appearance of laptops, the internet or smart phones, facilitate the way of communication, workers’ life is more flexible, he/she can send any email with free mistakes and not by handwriting, also they can find sample emails online. Second, handwriting needs more concentration to know the correct word, without doing any grammar or spelling mistake, this will waste the time of the person or student, in order to erase and write the sentence correctly again. For example, schools these days are transferring to e-learning system, this way is much easier and assist the student to know the right word quickly and without the assistance of others. In my opinion this way of handwriting won’t help the student to write the word correctly, if he didn’t write it down on a paper. On the other hand, people are using the internet to search for any information, copying and printing out without understanding it; that’s why some think that handwriting is still important. First, till today during a conference or a meeting, you can find pencil and paper for the person to take notes, this way is still significant where it helps the one to know the meaning of what he / she is writing. Second, handwriting skills, aid man/woman to know how to write correctly, improve their skills, even when they need to send an email, to avow any mistakes or refer to auto-correction, this can also help during an oral conversation to know what they are saying and how to pronounce correctly. For example, when I started my job and began using the email, till today I still write down my email on paper to be sure is it free of errors before forwarding it. From my point of view, handwriting still important and must not let technology take over it. As a conclusion, handwriting must be kept and used in all sectors, where some people believe it is still necessary; others think that technology will replace it soon and life will be much easier. In my opinion, we can’t stop technology and return back, but we can control and don’t let it take over our lives and our way of studying.
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Technology
accessed all our daily life, at home, work even in schools. It
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changed
a lot and
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helped
this generation, in education and
especially
in
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handwriting
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skills
.
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Some
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people
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think
that
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handwriting
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skills
aren’t
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important
to
be learned
these days, others believe that
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handwriting
is
still
necessary and
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helps
a lot.

Way of writing
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changed
in several institutions and jobs, it turned the way of studying and working to be easier with
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less
errors.
First
, the appearance of laptops, the internet or smart phones, facilitate the way of communication, workers’ life is more flexible, he/she can
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send
any email with free mistakes and not by
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handwriting
,
also
they can find sample emails online. Second,
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handwriting
needs more concentration to
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know
the correct word, without doing any grammar or spelling mistake, this will waste the time of the person or student, in order to erase and
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write
the sentence
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correctly
again.
For example
, schools these days are transferring to e-learning system, this way is much easier and assist the student to
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know
the right word
quickly
and without the assistance of others. In my opinion this way of
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handwriting
won’t
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help
the student to
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write
the word
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correctly
, if he didn’t
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write
it down on a paper.

On the
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other
hand,
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people
are using the internet to search for any information, copying and printing out without understanding it; that’s why
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some
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think
that
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handwriting
is
still
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important
.
First
, till
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today
during a conference or a meeting, you can find pencil and paper for the person to take notes, this way is
still
significant where it
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helps
the one to
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know
the meaning of what he / she is writing. Second,
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handwriting
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skills
, aid
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man
/woman to
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know
how to
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write
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correctly
,
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improve
their
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skills
, even when they need to
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send
an email, to avow any mistakes or refer to auto-correction, this can
also
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help
during an oral conversation to
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know
what they are saying and how to pronounce
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correctly
.
For example
, when I
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started
my job and began using the email, till
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today
I
still
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write
down my email on paper to be sure is it free of errors
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before
forwarding it. From my point of view,
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handwriting
still
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important
and
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must
not
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let
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technology
take over it.

As a conclusion,
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handwriting
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must
be
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kept
and
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used
in all sectors, where
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some
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people
believe it is
still
necessary; others
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think
that
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technology
will replace it
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soon
and life will be much easier. In my opinion, we can’t
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stop
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technology
and
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return back
,
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but
we can control and don’t
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let
it take over our
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lives
and our way of studying.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Learning is a treasure that will follow its owner everywhere.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS essay Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
437 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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