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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable that Scientific knowledge allows Us to develope new technologies and help to solve us practical problems. Some people regard this as History is one of the most important subject in SchooL, while Group of people argue that science and Technology subjects are most important then history. Here in this essayI shall discuss both the views before reaching to my opinion. The debate Surrounding Science and technolgy is more important than history subject is the most charged today's era of education. on the one hand, there is an army of people convinced that history is one of the most important subject in schools, they the Come up with several arguments, first and foremost is students must be aware about their country's culture and festivals. History subject helps to understand about some particular city's civilization and their native language. It also gives us information related to our past culture. Secondly, studying History helps us to develope better understanding of the world in which we are living. for example history Can give us information About war which was happened in 1800s. on the other hand, a host of progressive also protest that science and technologies subjects are very Important. This lattersviewpoint is assisted with variouavalid reasons. Firstly, by studing Science and technology subjects life is become easy and more comfortable. It also helps to develop new type of technologies which would be helpful upcoming years. However, this helps us our work can be done faster. Secondly, this helps us to better know and understandother cultures and Societies. for instance, there are lots applicationsavailable in market which helps us to interact and communicate with foreign people and we can Understand their Culture and languages. To sum up, I personally feel that students must be aware about both subjects history and science both are helpful in a students’ life.
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is one of the most
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subject
in
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SchooL
, while Group of
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people
argue that
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science
and
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Technology
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subjects
are most
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important
then
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history
. Here in this
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essayI
shall discuss both the views
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before
reaching to my opinion.

The debate Surrounding
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Science
and
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technolgy
is more
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important
than
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history
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subject
is the most charged
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today
's era of education.
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on
the one hand, there is an army of
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people
convinced that
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history
is one of the most
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important
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subject
in schools,
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they the
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Come
up with several arguments,
first
and foremost is students
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must
be aware about their country's
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culture
and festivals.
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History
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subject
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helps
to understand about
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some
particular city's civilization and their native language. It
also
gives us information related to our past
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culture
.
Secondly
, studying
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History
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helps
us to
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develope
better understanding of the world in which we are living.
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for
example
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history
Can give us information About war which
was happened
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in 1800s
.

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on
the other hand, a host of progressive
also
protest that
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science
and
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technologies
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subjects
are
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very
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Important
. This
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lattersviewpoint
is assisted
with
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variouavalid
reasons.
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, by
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studing
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Science
and
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technology
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subjects
life
is become
easy and more comfortable. It
also
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helps
to develop new type of
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technologies
which would be helpful upcoming years.
However
, this
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helps
us our work can
be done
faster.
Secondly
, this
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helps
us to better know and
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understandother
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cultures
and Societies.
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for
instance, there are lots
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applicationsavailable
in market which
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helps
us to interact and communicate with foreign
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people and
we can Understand their
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Culture
and languages.

To sum up, I
personally
feel that students
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must
be aware about both
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subjects
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history
and
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science
both are helpful in a students’ life.
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IELTS essay Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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