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Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a smallcompany. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support yourchoice. v.8

Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a smallcompany. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support yourchoice. v. 8
When it comes to seeking for a new job, company size might be one of the crucial elements that most people will like to consider. Large and small companies both have their own pros and cons. How to choose from these two categories depends on what kind of company benefits one values the most. For me, I prefer to work in a large company, because of the more competitive environment that helps people grow and also the better employee welfare compared to smaller companies. Large companies can gather lots of talented people from all over the world, which means that being one of their employees can have more intellectual inspiration that helps improve working skills even more. Large companies offer chances for the employees to have more exposure to different points of view, which spurs people’s creativity. Furthermore, the intellectual competition among individuals at a big company makes people actively enhance their own ability. Thus, large companies can provide a better opportunity for employees to elevate the working performance. In addition, large companies also tend to have greater welfare for their employees. Take HTC as an example, they have their own restaurants that offer free lunch and dinner, and also the private fitness centers that encourage people to do exercise after work. Moreover, as an employee in a large company can also enjoy lots of other benefits even outside the company. For instance, one well-known company in Taiwan, called TSMC, has signed contracts with various tourist attractions and restaurants in Taiwan, which offers their workers with leisure activities at a discounted price. Thus, the welfare of big companies is definitely superior to that of smaller companies. In conclusion, I favor large companies for the above reasons stated. Not only can they help people grow with environment of intense intellectual stimulus, but they also can give out lots of advantages on welfare that people may make use of either at work or after work.
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to seeking for a new job,
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size might be one of the crucial elements that most
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people
will like to consider.
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and
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small
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companies
both have their
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pros and cons. How to choose from these two categories depends on what kind of
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company
benefits one values the most. For me, I prefer to
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work
in a
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large
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company
,
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because
of the more competitive environment that
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helps
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people
grow and
also
the better
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employee
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welfare
compared to smaller
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companies
.

Large
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companies
can gather lots of talented
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people
from all over the world, which means that being one of their
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employees
can have more intellectual inspiration that
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helps
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improve
working
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skills
even more.
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Large
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companies
offer chances for the
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employees
to have more exposure to
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different
points of view, which spurs
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people’s
creativity.
Furthermore
, the intellectual competition among individuals at a
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big
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company
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makes
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people
actively
enhance their
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own
ability.
Thus
,
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large
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companies
can provide a better opportunity for
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employees
to elevate the working performance.

In addition
,
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large
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companies
also
tend to have greater
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welfare
for their
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employees
. Take
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HTC
as an example, they have their
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own
restaurants that offer free lunch and dinner, and
also
the private fitness centers that encourage
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people
to do exercise after
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work
.
Moreover
, as an
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employee
in a
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large
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company
can
also
enjoy lots of other benefits even outside the
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company
.
For instance
, one well-known
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company
in Taiwan, called
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TSMC
, has signed contracts with various tourist attractions and restaurants in Taiwan, which offers their workers with leisure activities at a discounted price.
Thus
, the
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welfare
of
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big
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companies
is definitely superior to that of smaller
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companies
.

In conclusion
, I favor
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large
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companies
for the above reasons stated. Not
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only
can they
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help
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people
grow with environment of intense intellectual stimulus,
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but
they
also
can give out lots of advantages on
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welfare
that
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people
may
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make
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use
of either at
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work
or after
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work
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a smallcompany. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support yourchoice. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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