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Some people prefer to take risks

Some people prefer to take risks jVDqa
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Peonle


who

Want

to

succeed

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must


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constantl


and

gain

mo

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improve
their knowledge and

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exherience


new things

take

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risks


need to

and work

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hard


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First of all


it

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iS


impossible to
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live


without lying

new

want

to

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arnn


how

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thingive


a
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magina


That you

will never

be

able

to

do

it

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yules


which

are

new

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withoud
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Garving


driving

things

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Sevandly
,

life

is

+00

short

to

stag in

one

place

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People


need

they

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make


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Ou
Y

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lives


We

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change
can
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tiful


is
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because


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witing
rings,

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leath


new

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lind


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moTe


dream

newt thing

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kno


otter:

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new


things.
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People


need

challenges

in

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deder
to

become

stronger, perfect ourselves

and

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move


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fervoard


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Personall


and

take

Ti

T

prefer

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te


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tay


new

person

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thingine


Probably a preposition is missing after 'tries'.
tries do


everything

every

matter

Thing

If I have!

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ide


to

achieve

if it

works

oz

I
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will will
be able

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te


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improve


my

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inowlendge


The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'experience'.
experience never


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admi


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stefart
of my

and

gain new

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natu


ire that

position

You

will

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nevet


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knoW


how much

you

can

accomplish

step

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undetentying


until

You

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mira


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Nevez


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come


in

moments
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to take risks

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
174 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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