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SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO STUDY ALONE. HOWEVER SOME PREFER TO STUDY WITH A TEACHER. WHICH ONE DO YOU PREFER?

SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO STUDY ALONE. HOWEVER SOME PREFER TO STUDY WITH A TEACHER. WHICH ONE DO YOU PREFER? G36Gw
Although some believe it is betters to study alone but in my opinion I am agree with those who think it is more beneficial to study with somebody else like your teacher. On the one hand if you study with your teacher he helps you with your questions and you will ask everything relate to your lessons. In this way by asking and answering you are able to understand your lessons better and even in an academic way. I think one of the benefit is that maybe your master gives you an important sample tests which includes his final questions. Then the result is the better score you will get. You can also help other like your friends or students who are far from education because you learn the lessons which others do not access. The other advantage is that you can learn your subjects in the perfect way because your teacher teach you what is best way of studying each subject. He will notice you to know the differences between the way of studying different types of subjects like match chemistry or even the rules of painting. But we cannot close our eyes on the benefits of studying alone. Individually learning has its advantages for sure. When you study your subjects by yourself you will have better concentration on your studying. It helps you to focus just on your lessons and there is no extra sound or any other person that make you lose your focus. You will not speak with anyone which can lead you far from your lessons. In conclusion you have to know and identify which is the best way of studying for you to have the best concentration. In my opinion I think we have just rely on our self expreinces.
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IELTS essay SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO STUDY ALONE. HOWEVER SOME PREFER TO STUDY WITH A TEACHER. WHICH ONE DO YOU PREFER?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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