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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, prefer to take risks and think that change is a positive thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, staying update along with the time is common in every new generation. While some individuals stick with traditional method of living life, I side with those who taking venture and gaining noble experience in life. In this contemporary era, staying update along with the time is common in every new generation. While some individuals stick with traditional method of living life, I side with those who taking venture and gaining noble experience in life. On the one hand it could be argued that living ordinary life is better. Those who claim that updating along with the time and grasping new thing is stumbling block in their life because they are already more cognizant about the activities that they habitually perform. For instance, in this technical era, the aged group will find it difficult to read newspaper on electrical gadgets due to the fact that they do not aware of its new features and even sometimes they do not know proper operation of the devices. What is more, they also argue that immemorial style of living is more comfortable because they are familiar with modes operandi so that they can live the life pleasantly. In this contemporary era, staying update along with the time is common in every new generation. While some individuals stick with traditional method of living life, I side with those who taking venture and gaining noble experience in life. On the one hand it could be argued that living ordinary life is better. Those who claim that updating along with the time and grasping new thing is stumbling block in their life because they are already more cognizant about the activities that they habitually perform. For instance, in this technical era, the aged group will find it difficult to read newspaper on electrical gadgets due to the fact that they do not aware of its new features and even sometimes they do not know proper operation of the devices. What is more, they also argue that immemorial style of living is more comfortable because they are familiar with modes operandi so that they can live the life pleasantly.
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some
individuals stick with traditional method of
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life
, I side with those
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who
taking venture and gaining noble experience in
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life
. In this contemporary
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era
, staying update
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along
with the
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time
is common in every
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new
generation. While
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
individuals stick with traditional method of
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living
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life
, I side with those
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who
taking venture and gaining noble experience in life.

On the one hand it could
be argued
that
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living
ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
is better. Those
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who
claim that updating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
along
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and grasping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
thing is stumbling block in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they are already more cognizant about the activities that they
habitually
perform.
For instance
, in this technical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
era
, the aged group will find it difficult to read newspaper on electrical gadgets due to the fact that they do not aware of its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
features and even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
they do not know proper operation of the devices.
What is more
, they
also
argue that immemorial style of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
is more comfortable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they are familiar with modes operandi
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
pleasantly
.

In this contemporary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
era
, staying update
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
along
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
is common in every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
generation. While
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
individuals stick with traditional method of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
, I side with those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
taking venture and gaining noble experience in life.

On the one hand it could
be argued
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
is better. Those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
claim that updating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
along
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and grasping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
thing is stumbling block in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they are already more cognizant about the activities that they
habitually
perform.
For instance
, in this technical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
era
, the aged group will find it difficult to read newspaper on electrical gadgets due to the fact that they do not aware of its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
features and even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
they do not know proper operation of the devices.
What is more
, they
also
argue that immemorial style of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
is more comfortable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they are familiar with modes operandi
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
pleasantly
.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, prefer to take risks and think that change is a positive thing.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
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