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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion v.2

Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. 2
Large supermarkets have recently introduced online grocery shopping. While many shoppers do their food shopping online, many still tend to prefer shopping the traditional way by visiting the brick and mortar store. This essay will discuss why online ration shopping has its benefits, but why traditional foodstuff shopping is ultimately superior. Online food shopping is certainly an efficient way to complete what many people consider to be a laborious chore. A person can simply click through a website and have food delivered-within a very short period of time-to one's door. As an example, a major general store in Australia promises a three hour turnaround time on grocery delivery. Being able to shop online saves busy people the unnecessary hassle of having to visit a supermarket. But not everyone needs to save time and visiting a supermarket can in fact be an extremely positive practice. Walking through the aisles allows one to choose from a vast array of different products and to decide exactly what goes into the shopping basket. For instant, think about the variety of different vegetables available at a general store. It is enjoyable selecting the best avocado from the pile. It goes without saying that general storee shopping, if you have the time, can be a pleasurable experience. With the introduction of online food shopping, traditional routines are being challenged. This essay discussed why online shopping could be extremely efficient process, but why shopping at the brick and mortar in person can be a pleasurable experience. In my opinion, visiting the supermarket offers a superior experience to online shopping
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. While
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,
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still
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the traditional way by visiting the brick and mortar
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. This essay will discuss why
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ration
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has its benefits,
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why traditional foodstuff
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is
ultimately
superior.

Online
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food
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is
certainly
an efficient way to complete what
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many
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people
consider to be a laborious chore. A person can
simply
click through a website and have
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food
delivered-within a
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very
short period of time-to one's door. As an example, a major general
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store
in Australia promises a
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three hour
turnaround time on grocery delivery. Being able to shop
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saves busy
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people
the unnecessary hassle of having to visit a supermarket.

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not everyone needs to save time and visiting a supermarket can in fact be an
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practice. Walking through the aisles
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allows
one to choose from a vast array of
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different
products and to decide exactly what goes into the
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basket. For instant,
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think
about the variety of
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different
vegetables available at a general
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store
. It is enjoyable selecting the best avocado from the pile. It goes without saying that general
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storee
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shopping
, if you have the time, can be a pleasurable experience.

With the introduction of
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online
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food
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shopping
, traditional routines are
being challenged
. This essay discussed why
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online
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shopping
could be
extremely
efficient process,
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but
why
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shopping
at the brick and mortar in person can be a pleasurable experience. In my opinion, visiting the supermarket offers a superior experience to
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online
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shopping
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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