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Some people prefer to live in the countryside. Others prefer to live in big cities. Which place would you prefer to live in? Write a paragraph of about 150-200 words to explain your choice.

Some people prefer to live in the countryside. Others prefer to live in big cities. Which place would you prefer to live in? Write a paragraph of about 150-200 words to explain your choice. Og2jE
Living in big cities and small towns, both have their advantages and disadvantages. However, from my perspective, I prefer living in a big city. The city life is fast-paced, and facilities are easily available. Any new products which come in markets instantly appear in the city as soon as the products are launched. There are a wide variety of shops and thus a wide variety of choices to choose from. Moreover, the standard of living is much higher in cities when compared to towns, such as job opportunities. In cities we find a large number of shopping malls, educational institutions, hospitals, restaurants, etc. growing in number each day. Modern technology and teaching methods may also be one of the reasons for this. In addition, we meet people coming from various places, share opinions, get to know different cultures, taste varieties of food and the list goes on. I do agree that living in cities has some disadvantages such as pollution, traffic jams and increased cost of living, but the advantages outweigh. Thus I believe living in cities is more beneficial than in a small town.
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towns, both have their advantages and disadvantages.
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, from my perspective, I prefer
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living
in a
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big
city. The city life is
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fast
-paced, and facilities are
easily
available. Any new products which
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come
in markets
instantly
appear in the city as
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soon
as the products
are launched
. There are a wide variety of shops and
thus
a wide variety of choices to choose from.
Moreover
, the standard of
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living
is much higher in
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cities
when compared to towns, such as job opportunities. In
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find
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a large number of
shopping malls, educational institutions, hospitals, restaurants, etc. growing in number each day. Modern technology and teaching methods may
also
be one of the reasons for this.
In addition
, we
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meet
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people
coming from various places, share opinions,
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get
to know
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different
cultures, taste varieties of food and the list goes on. I do
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agree
that
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living
in
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cities
has
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some
disadvantages such as pollution, traffic jams and increased cost of
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living
,
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but
the advantages outweigh.
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Thus
I believe
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living
in
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cities
is more beneficial than in a
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small
town.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to live in the countryside. Others prefer to live in big cities. Which place would you prefer to live in? Write a paragraph of about 150-200 words to explain your choice.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
185 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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