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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. gBPd
I grew up in a small town and then moved to a big city. I didn't think I would like living here, but I was wrong. I think life is much better in a big city. Transportation is much more convenient, everything is more exciting, and there is a greater variety of people. I can't imagine ever living in a small town again. Transportation is easier in a city. In a small town, you have to have a car to get around because there isn't any kind of public transportation. In a city, on the other hand, there are usually buses and taxis, and some cities have subways. Cities often have heavy traffic and expensive parking, but it doesn't matter because you can always take the bus. Using public transportation is usually cheaper and more convenient than driving a car, but you don't have this choice in a small town. City life is more exciting than small town life. In small towns usually nothing changes. You see the same people every day, you go to the same two or three restaurants, everything is the same. In a city things change all the time. You see new people everyday. . There are many restaurants, with new ones to choose from all the time. New plays come to the theaters and new musicians come to the concert halls. Cities have a diversity of people that you don't find in a small town. There are much fewer people in a small town and usually they are all alike. In a city you can find people from different countries, of different religions, of different races-you can find all kinds of people. This variety of people is what makes city life interesting. Life in a city is convenient, exciting, and interesting. After experiencing city life, I could never live in a small town again.
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is much better in a
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city. Transportation is much more convenient, everything is more exciting, and there is a greater variety of
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people
. I can't imagine ever living in a
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small
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Transportation is easier in a city. In a
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, you
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have a car to
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around
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hand, there are
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buses and taxis, and
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have subways.
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have heavy traffic and expensive parking,
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it doesn't matter
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cheaper and more convenient than driving a car,
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town.

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. In
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nothing

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the same
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every day, you go to the same two or three restaurants, everything is the same. In a city
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restaurants, with
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plays
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to the theaters and
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musicians
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to the concert halls.

Cities have a diversity of
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that you don't find in a
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. There are

much fewer
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in a
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countries, of
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races-you can find all kinds of
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city
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Life in a city is convenient, exciting, and interesting. After experiencing city
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, I could never
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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309 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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