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Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so. Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful v.2

Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so. Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful v. 2
It is an irrefutable fact that the music is the key for connecting people and helps to concentrate our mind on specific areas, makes head peaceful. Some people assert that the listening music during the study helps focus their mentality, whereas others folks wants quite place for the study. In my opinion, Everyone has its own learning capability as well which way is the more convenient and in this essay, I intend to support my view and discuss both sides before reasonable conclusion can be drawn. There are several reasons why the people play the opera while studying. Firstly, With the help of the melodious sound that youngsters feel more comfortable and whenever, they feel bored get 2 minutes break. In between this time, hearing tune makes the people more productive and energetic. According to the scientific research in The Arts Department, the harmony helps neurons to make more creative. On the contrary side, other humans feel that the jazz makes themselves, distracting their brain when they do work. For an instance, As per survey conducted in The Alberta University, they found that 50 percent of the persons Feels hard while continuous us reading. Those groups relax their system by going outside, instead of play songs. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that There are lots of music application which are approved by scientists that can improve your skills, but it should vary from one to another what they feel good.
It is an irrefutable fact that the music is the key for connecting
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people
and
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helps
to concentrate our mind on specific areas,
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makes
head peaceful.
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Some
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people
assert that the listening music during the study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
focus their mentality, whereas others folks wants quite place for the study. In my opinion, Everyone has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
learning capability
as well
which way is the more convenient and in this essay, I intend to support my view and discuss both sides
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before
reasonable conclusion can
be drawn
.

There are several reasons why the
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people
play the opera while studying.
Firstly
, With the
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help
of the melodious sound that youngsters
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
more comfortable and whenever, they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
bored
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
2 minutes break. In between this time, hearing tune
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
makes
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
more productive and energetic. According to the scientific research in The Arts Department, the harmony
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
neurons to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
more creative.

On the contrary
side, other humans
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
that the jazz
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
makes
themselves, distracting their brain when they do work. For an instance, As per survey conducted in The Alberta University, they found that 50 percent of the persons
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Feels
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
while continuous us reading. Those groups relax their system by going outside,
instead
of play songs.

To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that There are lots of music application which
are approved
by scientists that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
,
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but
it should vary from one to another what they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so. Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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