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some people prefer to have temporary jobs

some people prefer to have temporary jobs 7aYOn

Nowadays avoiding to do drudgery and permanent work, several groups of people are in need of temporary jobs, that means they are tempted by working less months and carrying out anything they want during a whole year. This essay will analyse this issue and provide it with the opinion of mine. Historically, both males and females used to work most of days a year without hustling and bustling in the place where they had lived. Carrying a burden or toiling made their life hard all day long, notwithstanding the backbreaking labour nobody intended to miss it. In all seasons farmers were busy with planting or sowing issues, shepherds took cattle in terms of grazing to meadow. In the aftermath, working collectively the population contributed the world by implementing on daily basis. According to modern time requirements, it is inevitable to assume a lifestyle without technological devices. Instead of performing donkeywork like in the past, currently temporary or online jobs turned a part of a life. Furthermore, fulfilling any type of work under heavy pressure is not a cup of tea of some. Intentionally executing temporary jobs are turned a golden opportunity in order to get a free ride. Simultaneously, it is thought to make a bulk amount of money easily. For example: Despite a well-known director Mr Ang Lee does not tend to have an official job rather than prefer to work on and off. Consequently, the ongoing propensity running at present has already been accepted normally. It had better change old minds of the eternal society alternately grinding away.

Nowadays The verb 'avoiding' is used with the gerund form: "avoiding doing".avoiding doing
avoiding to do
 drudgery and permanent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
, several groups of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are in need of temporary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
, that means they are tempted
 by working Did you mean "fewer"? The noun months is countable.fewer
less
 months and carrying out anything they want during a whole year. This essay will Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.analyze
analyse
 this issue and provide it with the opinion of mine.

Historically
, both males and females This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the days") or simply say "most days".most of the daysmost days
most of days
 a year without hustling and bustling in the place where they had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
. Carrying a burden or toiling made their life This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 all day long, notwithstanding the backbreaking Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
 nobody intended to miss it. In all seasons farmers were busy with planting or sowing issues, shepherds took cattle in terms of grazing to meadow. In the aftermath, working collectively
 the population contributed the world by implementing on daily basis.

According to modern time requirements, it is inevitable to assume a lifestyle without technological devices. Instead
 of performing Possible spelling mistake found.donkey work
donkeywork
 like in the past, currently
 temporary or online You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 turned a part of a life. Furthermore
, fulfilling any type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 under heavy pressure is not a cup of tea of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
. Intentionally
 executing temporary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
are turned
 a golden opportunity in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a free ride. Simultaneously
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a bulk amount of money easily
. For example
: Despite a well-known director Mr Ang Lee does not tend to have an official You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
rather
 than prefer to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 on and off.

Consequently
, the ongoing propensity running at present has already been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
normally
. It had better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 minds of the eternal society alternately
 grinding away. 